Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

You and I

our pace of life
gracefully transmuting
into golden retirement years

so much more
still to discover
with the time
we are blessed with
together

authors of our own
storybook ending
hand and in hand
toward the sunset



AP:  Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on April 14, 2019 for contest FREE VERSE OR RHYME POETRY IN ITS BEAUTY (#3) sponsored by EVE ROPER  -  RANKED 2ND

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Nette Onclaud April 25, 2019 at 4:54 PM winsome melody for twilight years, line... sweet congrats!..huggs Line Gauthier April 25, 2019 at 6:56 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, nette.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2019 at 11:25 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Line Gauthier April 25, 2019 at 12:15 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Sunshine. Much appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire April 24, 2019 at 4:18 PM Wonderful poem, wonderful win! Line Gauthier April 24, 2019 at 6:44 PM Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated.

Heidi Sands April 24, 2019 at 3:49 PM Congratulations for your win with this nice poem :) Line Gauthier April 24, 2019 at 6:45 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Heidi.

Connie Marcum Wong April 24, 2019 at 3:37 PM I love the romance in your entry Line. Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo Line Gauthier April 24, 2019 at 6:45 PM Thank you so much, Connie.

Eve Roper April 23, 2019 at 7:35 PM Line, congratulations on your win in my contest with this creative Free verse of Vienna and her husband Aldo, she will love it! The imagery and flow are beautiful. Hugs Eve ~`* Line Gauthier April 23, 2019 at 8:10 PM Thanks, Eve. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger April 17, 2019 at 1:30 AM A fantastic answer to the prompt, Line. Line Gauthier April 17, 2019 at 7:34 AM Thanks, Caren.

M. L. Kiser April 15, 2019 at 8:14 PM A lovely visual presented by this piece; well done. Line Gauthier April 15, 2019 at 9:16 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, ML.

Heidi Sands April 14, 2019 at 9:50 AM Very nice Line! :) Line Gauthier April 14, 2019 at 10:21 AM Thanks, Heidi. Much appreciated.

Judy Ball April 14, 2019 at 9:39 AM WoW! So beautiful. Wish that was the way it is for everyone. Wonderful sentiments. Love it. God Bless and Happy Easter to you and yours. JB Line Gauthier April 14, 2019 at 10:24 AM Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Judy.

Constance La France April 14, 2019 at 9:24 AM Line, this is a lovely poem, I can just picture it in my mind, well done ~ Line Gauthier April 14, 2019 at 10:24 AM Thank you, Constance. Much appreciated.

Panagiota Romios April 14, 2019 at 2:45 AM Awesomely penned Panagiota Line Gauthier April 14, 2019 at 8:07 AM Thank you so much, Panagiota. Most appreciated.