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You and I

our pace of life
gracefully transmuting 
into golden retirement years
so much more 
still to discover
with the time
we are blessed with
together 
authors of our own
storybook ending
hand and in hand 
toward the sunset



AP:  Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on April 14, 2019 for contest FREE VERSE OR RHYME POETRY IN ITS BEAUTY (#3) sponsored by EVE ROPER  -  RANKED 2ND

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/25/2019 4:54:00 PM

winsome melody for twilight years, line... sweet congrats!..huggs

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/25/2019 6:56:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, nette.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/25/2019 11:25:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/25/2019 12:15:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Sunshine. Much appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 4/24/2019 4:18:00 PM

Wonderful poem, wonderful win!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/24/2019 6:44:00 PM

Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/24/2019 3:49:00 PM

Congratulations for your win with this nice poem :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/24/2019 6:45:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Heidi.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/24/2019 3:37:00 PM

I love the romance in your entry Line. Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/24/2019 6:45:00 PM

Thank you so much, Connie.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/23/2019 7:35:00 PM

Line, congratulations on your win in my contest with this creative Free verse of Vienna and her husband Aldo, she will love it! The imagery and flow are beautiful. Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/23/2019 8:10:00 PM

Thanks, Eve. Most appreciated.