You a Dead Man

Okay Father, nice talkin to you…
WOW fellas, last meal too huh?
Well, thanks but no thanks
Been readin up on my Shakespeare
and that “To be or not to be” guy?
I kinda identify with that dude 
Cause I DO be right now
but in a couple of hours
I AIN’T gonna be, so--- 
it seems I’ve lost my appetite…
(I COULD use a drink though)


6/27/2015
For the contest sponsored by: John Lawless

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/24/2015 8:51:00 AM
This is so cool, Tim! Totally urban. Congrats on your win! xoxo
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Date: 7/23/2015 1:43:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Tim ! Great work!
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Date: 7/23/2015 12:17:00 AM
WOW,,, i was not expecting that. Tim, Congrats on your SHORT SHRIFT win. Love SKAT
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Date: 7/22/2015 11:18:00 PM
Oh yes Tim: I think my appetite would be gone but sure, I'd be up for a Mango Daiquiri...Congrats on a fine win. SuZ
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Date: 7/22/2015 8:45:00 PM
Great characterisation, Tim, with suitable gallows humour. Love it. Congratulations. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/22/2015 7:00:00 PM
Ah, Tim, the unrepentant giving "short shrift" to those hoping for closure. This one had a bit of a twist to it. Thanks for entering the contest
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Date: 7/22/2015 6:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/22/2015 6:02:00 PM
love your unique take on the theme Tim congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/30/2015 5:22:00 PM
You always have a way to make me laugh......that is, if you aren't making me cry! I love it that you can do both so well !!!
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Date: 6/30/2015 2:54:00 PM
that “To be or not to be” guy...hehe Nicely written, Tim. Love that ending! Always a pleasure reading from you dear! Always, Laura
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Date: 6/29/2015 12:38:00 PM
Interesting topic... Good write.
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Date: 6/28/2015 6:28:00 PM
Tim, this is wonderful for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poem haiku 10 and for the nice comment
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Date: 6/28/2015 10:34:00 AM
intriguing piece worth all my while, meal or no meal, tim... very engaging!.. soupie mail!.. huggs
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Date: 6/28/2015 3:36:00 AM
This is extremely brilliant write, you painted very beautiful and with vivid imagery. Hope this will win the contest, good luck.....................7!..........A.M.
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Date: 6/28/2015 3:04:00 AM
Can't blame the guy for loosing his appetite...A Shakespeare read before the moment certainly makes for some introspection. Goodluck for the contest, Tim!
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Date: 6/28/2015 2:29:00 AM
a powerful poem, wow, its straight and honest and to the point. thank you for your ki8nd comments and support on my poems
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Date: 6/28/2015 12:46:00 AM
Sharp, but poignant write, Tim. Should do well. Good luck in the contest. Regards, Viv
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