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YOU , THE 'I' IN ME

your breath is my soul you are the only reason for my whole ... without you , who m I ? without you, even i cant die you, the 'I' in me... you, the sky in me .... my salvation, my "last day" are you ... my faith ,my "mine" you ..... (Mine - my I-ness is you) © ßíkräm Singh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/8/2016 11:17:00 AM
Lovely and breathtaking
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Date: 2/13/2015 8:28:00 PM
How beautiful,such a romantic write for your beloved, a 7. Blessings Eve
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Date: 2/13/2015 8:28:00 PM
:) 7
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Date: 1/31/2015 1:29:00 AM
Bikram, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/31/2015 1:03:00 AM
Bikram, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/29/2015 2:25:00 PM
a beautiful write... nad!
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Date: 1/29/2015 12:08:00 PM
Beautiful verses about love and faith and a world entire about philosophers and poets, saints and religious men cannot find all the truth.But heart feels it.Best regards and wishes.
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