You

i can remember the day first met with you i saw the blue deep eyes that was the day fall in love with you.... i can feel you around me when you are not there you are my oxygen i can breathe lively here in love everything is fair...... my heart beats for you my sleep dreams for you my sound sing for you just wanna to say i love you....

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 9/9/2017 5:29:00 AM

What a beautiful, romantic piece!! Congrats Shanta, for having your piece featured in the PoetrySoup homepage!! ;-)

Dean Wood

Date: 9/5/2017 1:04:00 PM

A beautiful love poem Shanta.

John Leong

Date: 9/4/2017 11:18:00 AM

nice read! i felt like i was lost in a love story; i hope the person you fancy will return the love you have well expressed here. till then, cheers!

Funom Makama

Date: 6/30/2017 10:11:00 AM

This is wonderful. I love your thoughts and apt creativity. Welcome to poetry soup.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/14/2017 11:38:00 AM

A very beautiful written poem, anything doesn t seems to be good enough when you re in love, it seems like that love has complete you however i m new on this site and have poems of similar categories and i would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them

Shanta Sumaiya
Date: 6/15/2017 2:45:00 PM

thanks for ur appreciating review.