You

i can remember the day
first met with you
i saw the blue deep eyes
that was the day
fall in love with you....

i can feel you around me
when you are not there
you are my oxygen
i can breathe lively here
in love everything is fair......

my heart beats for you
my sleep dreams for you
my sound sing for you
just wanna to say
i love you....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kimathi Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 5:29 AM
What a beautiful, romantic piece!! Congrats Shanta, for having your piece featured in the PoetrySoup homepage!! ;-)
Wood Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 1:04 PM
A beautiful love poem Shanta.
Leong Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 11:18 AM
nice read! i felt like i was lost in a love story; i hope the person you fancy will return the love you have well expressed here. till then, cheers!
Makama Avatar
June 30, 2017 at 10:11 AM
This is wonderful. I love your thoughts and apt creativity. Welcome to poetry soup.
Ajmal Avatar
June 14, 2017 at 11:38 AM
A very beautiful written poem, anything doesn t seems to be good enough when you re in love, it seems like that love has complete you however i m new on this site and have poems of similar categories and i would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
Sumaiya Avatar
June 15, 2017 at 2:45 PM
thanks for ur appreciating review.
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