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Roses are red like the color of my heart. Violets represent the color of my face when I'm with you. I know this is a bit cheesy but I... Will say that you represent Aphrodite. You're so cute like a kitten sleeping. Or maybe a box full of puppies? You make the word "emo" make me think of "emotes" and The only emote I do is "loving you". You could cut a C-Section in me and see all the butterflies. My hands are almost broken from all the roses I picked for you. The word "LOVE" to me means: L - I love you , O - I love you , V - I love you , E - I love you I'm not that creative like a 5 year old but... You make me think of "Legos". I can fit all of the pieces to build us together happily ever after! I want to hug you like how I hug my pillow at night, And when I fall asleep, I dream of you... I wish I had more time to name reasons on why I love you, But the hourglass I have shattered and It would take me more time to fix everything... And let's be honest... No one would try to fix that stuff. You also remind me of a scary roller-coaster. I'm not saying you're scary but that good feeling people get when it feels like their soul is being taken, because you take mine away. I think I'm out of clever ways to say "You are amazing". Maybe you could change this and help me find more. I just want you to know that I love you, I love you, I love you. So, as to what I was saying earlier: Roses are red, Violets are blue I Love You.

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Date: 2/18/2016 1:56:00 AM
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Date: 11/30/2015 12:08:00 PM
:) SKAT ..
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Date: 2/9/2014 9:17:00 PM
Norbin, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 1/31/2014 4:48:00 PM
Love is a magical thing. However, what your secret in keeping it real? Dark Sunshine
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Date: 1/29/2014 8:34:00 AM
Hi Norbin...Welcome to Poetry Soup!!! made an awesome poem ,dear... I hope you enjoy the great experience as you go beyond writing poems...i'm sure you'll love the people here..they are so kind and very supportive...Good luck to your journey in poetry world!!! ..always..AiyaH :0)
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Date: 1/28/2014 6:21:00 AM
Norbin, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/28/2014 3:38:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Norbin- I choose your first sweet written poem - hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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