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This is a song from the movie JUNO I hope you like it You're a part time lover And a full time friend The monkey on your back is the latest trend I don't see what anyone can see in anyone else But you Here is a and here is the steeple We sure are cute for two ugly people I don't see what anyone can see in anyone else But you We both have shiny happy fits of rage I want more fans, You want more stage I don't see what anyone can see in anyone else But you I'm trying to keep it real And I'm in love with how you feel I don't see what anyone can see in anyone else But you I kiss you on the brain in the shadows of a train I kiss you all starry-eyed My body swings from side to side I don't see what anyone can see in anyone else But you The pebbles forgive me The trees forgive me So why can't you forgive me? I don't see what anyone can see in anyone else But you No, I don't see what anyone can see in anyone else But you..... I would like to dedicate this song to my dearest friends of mine.......... Onissa MCcarley And Grant Joslin

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Derrick Burton

Date: 9/2/2008 9:45:00 PM

you are not freakin me out, nor am I angry with you. Poets we are of another nation, one that is not admediately felt by the earth, you are learning from things around you, slow but gradually performing what you see and feel. This is normal and moves forward your transition into the ultimate poet. You are the product of your inviroment, things that are real pulls eyes into your direction. www.nortonpoets.com read some samples these great and different poets. ai look her up shes good.

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/2/2008 4:16:00 PM

you just made a fan. i liked the style very very much and the thoughts. i felt it and it felt good. John H Loving III age a very young 45, straight but not predjudice and great critic You just made a fan

Derrick Burton

Date: 9/2/2008 8:24:00 AM

what I met was you leave your name in peoples boxes so much, some with read your stuff out of curiousity. thats good, wow I thought I took everything personal. LOL

Derrick Burton

Date: 9/1/2008 8:31:00 PM

good, odd poem in a good way. Most of the time people can create something like this and suprisingly be a hit. cool poem keep writing and hit that dictionary, 3 words a day tops!