You

Now lm back out there in the blue
                         I can not belp but always reminice
                          On a time when we were once two
                         Those moments were such bliss

                         That is if what we had was true
                           Still l am going on the premise 
                          That we could once again pursue 
                           What we had as l really so miss

                           Is it something l did not say or do
                            How l ask did it come to all this
                            Whenever l am thinking of you
                            Feelings deeper than thy abbsye
       

                         
  
                            
                                 original version of love is rare 
                                      1998 about an ex this is another update lost usb so 
writing from memory

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