You

The sun will shine brighter tomorrow when you
pick me in in your shiny car
take me to a hill 
where I can feel the sun setting
he'll look at the stars and say
"You shine brighter than all of those stars,"
smiles back and forth
till the sun comes up
then home I go
to think about the future 
and to thik about you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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July 30, 2018 at 12:06 PM
Hello Emily, as I read this poem, I felt the love for this person in this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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