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If you do not made of gold Why do I preserve you If you are not God Why do I praise you If you are not a flower Why do I adore you I have a weakness When I glance at your beauty I have a weakness When I see you smile I have a weakness When I saw you walked by You are a beautiful flower That has just blossom A new treasure That have just been discover A new falling star In my universe

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Date: 2/15/2010 10:57:00 AM
wow this is great if you were going to enter it in the i love you because contest then do it cuz this is great i have been rading them and it's the best i've read so far.....wait dont enter,or i'll never win! lol i loved it tho beautifully written and carefully! =)
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Date: 12/6/2009 3:58:00 AM
This is a beautiful piece....wonderful sentiments....
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Date: 10/3/2009 11:48:00 AM
Nicely done passionate poem. Love the comparisons. Keep writing. Sara
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