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YORE YORE bethinks know by heart born to borrowed lives wide-spreads, a worthy life stands I, light, at tunnel's end. "Younger minds in elderly heads." 2020 September 17 *2nd Place* Pyramids ~~Joseph May

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Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 9/21/2020 10:08:00 AM

Great poem, William! Congrats on your win! ‘Young minds in elderly heads!’ very nice!!

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/21/2020 10:17:00 AM

Thank you, Krish, enjoy your day my friend, Aloha! William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2020 1:54:00 PM

what a great quote, that final line. I feel like that, a Peter pan in a body getting ever older. Congrats on the win, my friend.

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/20/2020 2:09:00 PM

Quite so, Peter Pan gives all of us a much vivid outlook on what is on the other side of aging, I appreciate your accolade, Andrea, Aloha! William

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/20/2020 12:09:00 PM

- Love the last line ... so true, William ... your photo made me laugh :))) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/20/2020 2:03:00 PM

Precisely, the crux of the whole for our joyful life lives onward--thanks for your sentiments and accolade, Anne-Lise, Aloha! William

Joseph May

Date: 9/20/2020 11:57:00 AM

Very nicely done William, Congrats on your win..

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/20/2020 1:20:00 PM

Thanks, Joseph, gift of opportunity, Aloha! William

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/20/2020 10:58:00 AM

This could so be written for RBG...I love how you see William. congrats on the win.

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/20/2020 1:16:00 PM

Ah! The grande dame said, "Fight for the things that you care about, but do it in a way that will lead others to join you", RIP--much thanks, Jeanne, Aloha! William

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/19/2020 8:10:00 AM

Wow William! Nicely stated and the picture is priceless! Good luck, Linda

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/19/2020 10:34:00 AM

I am appreciative for your thoughtfulness, Linda, thanks for the encouragement, Aloha! Willam