Sneha Rv Poet Limerick

Yogi - the Able Snowman

There once was a snowman named Pipes
who liked breaking stereotypes.
He once wore a Toga     
and in it did Yoga -
Hysterical folk needed wipes.


The children there stood upside down 
for pleasure, and Pipes hid a frown.
“They laugh at my shape -
I’ll make them all gape
at how I amaze all the town.”


        ~After managing a headstand!~



Against him all kids held a grudge.
Pipes said, drinking hot chocolate fudge,
“for greater good I’ll
stay here for a while -
should teach you to think twice, not judge!”


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31/12/2017

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Jerry T Curtis June 3, 2018 at 5:52 AM Very clever, you made me laugh

Ronald A. Williams February 11, 2018 at 9:02 AM Very cute and humorous. I liked the write.

Jack Horne February 4, 2018 at 12:14 PM LOL, love it

Gershon Wolf January 23, 2018 at 10:03 PM Wow! Terrific! You've set "Frosty the Snowman on his proverbial ear---and then some! Not only is this highbrow humor, but that last stanza is a combo of social message-personal putdown ZINGER. Well-deserved victory, Sneha!

Tom Cunningham January 20, 2018 at 6:07 PM Congratulations on your win Sneha. Regards Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu January 18, 2018 at 5:31 PM Sneha, there is a good lesson here in this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.

Paul Callus January 18, 2018 at 8:18 AM Congratulations on this merited win, Sneha! Had no doubt this would make you proud:) Regards // paul

Vasudevan Desikachari January 17, 2018 at 3:58 PM Excellent work Sneha and I am sure every child would love to read this aloud and laugh.

Jan Allison January 13, 2018 at 7:13 PM Many congrats on your win Sneha:-) hugs Jan xx

Melissa Tracy January 7, 2018 at 9:01 AM Creativity at it's best! Love this :) Congrats on your win and best wishes to you dear Sneha!

Viv Wigley January 7, 2018 at 3:14 AM Funny and clever, Sneha, well done! Viv x

Viv Wigley January 7, 2018 at 3:14 AM Funny and clever, Sneha, well done! Viv x

Line Gauthier January 6, 2018 at 4:10 PM Delightful. Congrats on your fine win, Sneha.

Richard Lamoureux January 6, 2018 at 1:30 PM Well done, congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich December 31, 2017 at 7:28 PM Sneha, this is VERY VERY good. The meter, the humor. Wow, a FAVE.

Paul Callus December 31, 2017 at 4:46 PM Oh! This is excellent Sneha! Not one, but three Limericks! I love your Yogi:) I hope this is for the contest...would definitely see it on the winners' list! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit December 31, 2017 at 8:07 AM I enjoyed reading your poem, Sneha--the Yogi sure had talent--unique theme, well executed..best for a win.

Arturo Michael December 31, 2017 at 4:02 AM " drinking hot chocolate fudge," warms the inside, a pleasure to the mind...Comparing sometimes ...you miss the whole picture...All the best for 2018

Jan Allison December 31, 2017 at 2:43 AM Absolutely BRILLIANT Sneha!!! You are such an incredibly talented young lady I am in awe of your creativity!:-) Sending my very best wishes for 2018:-) hugs jan xx