Yet Brokenhearted

Some say Love is everything

Some say love is nothing

Of course, if one has never been loved,
never felt such warmth from another;
absent the caring nearness of a  dear
mother, father, sister or pal-of-a-brother

not been taught by nurturing family

but, in fact – of love deprived

then, before lived, 
              to one's buried heart
love has already died…

It is not, necessarily, that one’s heart
has never sincerely desired though not tried,

but the painting of his world
his experience has so lied

any chance for developing
empathetic features -- 

his nature has been cruelly 
deprived – 
           therefore,
before the feathering brushwork of him, 
             his portrait of love

has already cracked, peeled,
unrecognizable~ dried….

Sometimes things lost
are never found: that sand-castle
on beach,  adult, sunny, encouraging
faces, painted by the sun
like a silly made-up clown -- 

Somethings lost, are never found

Some couples meant to be
are never joyfully bound
by faith in cherished sacrament
of marriage...Cupid and his trusty
bow left sadly to disparage. 
                  
                     God has His
Heaven, and the Devil
our misguided low-some hell

before learning to soar~ man fell

the joy of loving stopped

before started – and the Spirit of
Love, yet brokenhearted….
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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George Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 9:19 PM
This is so touching a poem resounding the pain over the loss of love. When God is all love, the devil is all malice and hatred. In the combat between God and the devil. it is the devil who often wins. "before learning to soar~ man fell/ the joy of loving stopped" So true, dear Joe. All of us are pained by this stark reality! A wonderful poem. Into My FAVE.
DiMino Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 8:05 AM
Thank you, Valsa; your positive feedback and encouragement means a lot to me. Have a beautiful day my friend!
Empress Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 9:50 AM
This is so touching and soulful, i love how your lines just flow with such deep emotions depicting loss and contemplation, of time and beyond that really resonates and makes me feel so much. I especially love the lines “ Sometimes things lost are never found: that sand-castle on beach, adult, sunny, encouraging faces, painted by the sun like a silly made-up clown -- “ couldnt have said it any better! How profound and poetically touching! A very poignant and powerful write! Fave it is
DiMino Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 11:49 AM
Thank you very much, IE; you made my day. Blessings!!
Maverick Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 3:38 PM
Very pojgnant here Joe..You touch on a lot of Reality, and none of us are 'fully to blame' For as you put..sin at the start exacerbates Our strains and pain.'
DiMino Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 7:15 PM
Hi Joe; thank you for highlighting this additional dimension to the work. Blessings my friend.
Pandit Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 5:05 AM
Deep emotions throughout my friend. Your exploration of relationships makes the reader pause. A meaningful write, Joe.
DiMino Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 8:11 AM
Thank you, Vijay; that's all a writer can really hope for, to write something that others can relate to in my opinion. We are all different, yet hopefully enough alike to relate in meaningful sensitive ways.
Greenhough Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 9:29 PM
Such a deep look at relationships, this treatise is a deep poem . Love can be attained. Perhaps not everyone wants that tied down feeling.
DiMino Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 8:16 AM
Hi Hilda; of course, I hear you. Especially in the case of marriage, so much needs to a-line: lifestyles, timing -- and no loving is less powerful.... Great comment.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 9:27 PM
A sad case when someone is not loved. Cupid and his trusty bow left sadly to disparage
DiMino Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 8:20 AM
I imagine he has broken many a bow, refusing to admit the archer was too emotionally involved. God's love is extreme, tenacious. Sometimes mended arrows unite ever-more dearly.
One Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 12:48 PM
Through vivid imagery and metaphorical language, your poem evokes a sense of loss and longing. The comparison of love to a sandcastle washed away by the tide emphasizes the ephemeral nature of love and the pain of its absence. Additionally, the mention of couples who never find joyous union despite their potential for love adds a layer of melancholy to the narrative, suggesting that some destinies remain unfulfilled despite earnest desires.
DiMino Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 8:35 AM
Thank you, Si; for taking time to consider this write. I have no answers...all my writes are personal tries and self revelations. Hoping I am not so different, and maybe what worked/failed for me will benefit others. Ultimately, fate is a mystery. I am often reminded of a saying told to me by people with much experience: "there are no atheist in Fox Holes".
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