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Yesterday's Beauty



In the distance the old barn leans away
But still of interest to artistic eyes
Appreciating the beauty of yesterday



Triplet form..for the Whatever Contest...

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Joe Maverick

July 10, 2011 at 1:47 PM

A timely and observant write Barbara, showing yesterdays reality, by the light of todays changes..

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 20, 2011 at 10:10 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Whatever"contest Barbara. Love, Carol

James Peranteau

May 17, 2011 at 8:43 AM

Indeed, many have this allure for the ol' barns of yore, as you quite beautifully have proved with this write dear poet ! Great entry Barbara ! Have a great week my friend....much love, james

Derrick Burton

May 15, 2011 at 6:26 PM

beautiful.....

Andrea Dietrich

May 15, 2011 at 4:50 PM

I really liked this the first time I saw it too. Glad to see it in the winners' circle, Barbara.Congratulations.

Robert A. Dufresne

May 15, 2011 at 6:25 AM

Very well written sentiments of what was conversion to what is. Beauty is beauty old and new. Congratulations Barbara

Nette Onclaud

May 14, 2011 at 9:44 PM

sensational write barbara... bouquets for you for garnering a great spot in the contest. congrats!

Matt Hunt

May 14, 2011 at 8:46 PM

Very good job Barbara! Congrats on the placement. I feel honored to be on there with you:) R.M.

John Freeman

May 14, 2011 at 6:10 PM

Congratulations on your poem's success Barbara in Brian's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

May 14, 2011 at 1:54 PM

Dear LNC, let's do the dance of joy to celebrate your win! Congratulations. Love, carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

May 14, 2011 at 1:34 PM

Congrats BG on your win!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 14, 2011 at 1:24 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of brian, Barbara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 14, 2011 at 1:01 PM

Congrats BG on your success in Whatever contest with this elegant entry so profound .. enjoy another beautiful win ...

Carolyn Devonshire

May 14, 2011 at 11:42 AM

Oh yes, I've seen so many paintings of those old barns. We even had a "red barn" poetry contest here not long ago. As we drive along and see these old barns, it's hard not to try and imagine how they looked in years gone by. Beautiful entry for Brian's contest, dear LNC. Always looking for you in the winners' list. Thanks for your sweet comment on my dream poem. Keep enjoying those twins!!! Love, Carolyn