Yesterday

Yesterday

Yesterday: I saw a glimpse of yesterday
All  the flood plain was a waterway
My  eyes took in bare half sunken trees
Troubles stirred the wispy misty breeze
Seemed then as I were taken back in time
So I should witness that primeval clime
Far into some long forgotten past
Away from here I travelled eons vast

Now I see
It all becomes clear to me
Looks are never what they seem
As I journey, through my dream
Though my years are rolling by
They’re never still, they seem to fly
Here today, but on the morrow gone
To some long distant place anon
Stay the time I will be moving on

Oh, how I am, but a grain of dust
I lived and loved on this Earthly crust
Believe someone of this future clay
In images a gift, they will say
Yesterday: I saw a glimpse of yesterday
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Allison Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 4:41 PM
wow am singing along to the Beatles song whilst reading this. Awesome write. Happy reading and writing Jan
Guzzi Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 7:42 PM
Original way to go! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Johnson Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations on your big win. Great writing. Love, Joyce
Kendrick Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 7:59 AM
Way to go with this great winnind work..Special entry..Congrats..Sara
Kendrick Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 7:59 AM
Suppose to be winning..Sorry.SK
Lamoureux Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 8:09 AM
Richard! You are back! This makes my day, it is also good to wish you a hardy congratulations. The soup needs your good humor for flavor.
Manassian Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 2:40 AM
This is a lovely poem, Richard. I'm very glad to see it in the winner's list. Nostalgic and sweet.
Hamilton Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 4:51 PM
excellent poem Richard can see why Roy picked this congrats on win hugs
Seal Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 6:11 PM
Hi Linda, Thanks very much, You turning up reminds me of another line from that song, 'There's a shadow hanging over me', lol , Take care, Richard
Gorelick Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 4:09 PM
Your use of rhyme makes this special. congrats to you. BG
Seal Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 6:02 PM
Thank you Barbara, nice seeing you, Take care, Richard
Jones Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 1:46 PM
This is awesome.....well done...congratulations
Seal Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 5:49 PM
Thank you Donna, been away a while but getting back on track, Keep well, Take care, Richard
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 1:25 PM
Congratulations Richard xx
Seal Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 5:45 PM
Thanks Mandy, long time no see, hope you're doing/feeling better now. Take care, Richard
Jerden Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 12:15 PM
Well, I see from the other comments that you are a prodigal son. Welcome back and congratulations on the win! I really liked the rhyme and I think it goes well with the mood of the song.
Seal Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 5:44 PM
Yes Roy, I have been out for a while, looked in and saw your contest and couldn't resist giving it a go. I had crossed the flood plain here that very morning and started to get an idea and your contest sealed it. Thank you for the placement. Never dreampt it would do so well. Take care, Richard
Hendricks Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 1:52 PM
A deep write, bruv. Hey, welcome back. I sure missed having you around. Soupmail. Licia :-)
Seal Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 5:29 PM
Hi Sis, I'm sorta back, still struggling with time at mo. Thanks for comment and your soupmail has been answered :)
A  Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 12:28 PM
Wow, Can I borrow your glasses. Richard, a true poem. I do hope this means, you will share your light with us again. This is very deep, and I know it's more than meets the eye. I have the cookie jar open, and I'm happy to see you here. Remember SKAT Wuves You :)
Seal Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 7:18 PM
Hi Skat, thanks for the comment, I'm getting back in but slowly, I've been so busy the last month. Yeah I know you have the cookie jar, but every time I get near it you pull it further away lol. Take care, Richard
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