Yesterday

Yesterday

Yesterday: I saw a glimpse of yesterday
All  the flood plain was a waterway
My  eyes took in bare half sunken trees
Troubles stirred the wispy misty breeze
Seemed then as I were taken back in time
So I should witness that primeval clime
Far into some long forgotten past
Away from here I travelled eons vast

Now I see
It all becomes clear to me
Looks are never what they seem
As I journey, through my dream
Though my years are rolling by
They’re never still, they seem to fly
Here today, but on the morrow gone
To some long distant place anon
Stay the time I will be moving on

Oh, how I am, but a grain of dust
I lived and loved on this Earthly crust
Believe someone of this future clay
In images a gift, they will say
Yesterday: I saw a glimpse of yesterday
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 2/16/2014 4:41:00 PM
wow am singing along to the Beatles song whilst reading this. Awesome write. Happy reading and writing Jan
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Date: 2/8/2014 7:42:00 PM
Original way to go! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/8/2014 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win. Great writing. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/8/2014 7:59:00 AM
Way to go with this great winnind work..Special entry..Congrats..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/8/2014 7:59:00 AM
Suppose to be winning..Sorry.SK
Date: 2/7/2014 8:09:00 AM
Richard! You are back! This makes my day, it is also good to wish you a hardy congratulations. The soup needs your good humor for flavor.
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Date: 2/7/2014 2:40:00 AM
This is a lovely poem, Richard. I'm very glad to see it in the winner's list. Nostalgic and sweet.
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Date: 2/6/2014 4:51:00 PM
excellent poem Richard can see why Roy picked this congrats on win hugs
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Richard D Seal
Date: 2/6/2014 6:11:00 PM
Hi Linda, Thanks very much, You turning up reminds me of another line from that song, 'There's a shadow hanging over me', lol , Take care, Richard
Date: 2/6/2014 4:09:00 PM
Your use of rhyme makes this special. congrats to you. BG
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Richard D Seal
Date: 2/6/2014 6:02:00 PM
Thank you Barbara, nice seeing you, Take care, Richard
Date: 2/6/2014 1:46:00 PM
This is awesome.....well done...congratulations
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Richard D Seal
Date: 2/6/2014 5:49:00 PM
Thank you Donna, been away a while but getting back on track, Keep well, Take care, Richard
Date: 2/6/2014 1:25:00 PM
Congratulations Richard xx
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Richard D Seal
Date: 2/6/2014 5:45:00 PM
Thanks Mandy, long time no see, hope you're doing/feeling better now. Take care, Richard
Date: 2/6/2014 12:15:00 PM
Well, I see from the other comments that you are a prodigal son. Welcome back and congratulations on the win! I really liked the rhyme and I think it goes well with the mood of the song.
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Richard D Seal
Date: 2/6/2014 5:44:00 PM
Yes Roy, I have been out for a while, looked in and saw your contest and couldn't resist giving it a go. I had crossed the flood plain here that very morning and started to get an idea and your contest sealed it. Thank you for the placement. Never dreampt it would do so well. Take care, Richard
Date: 2/5/2014 1:52:00 PM
A deep write, bruv. Hey, welcome back. I sure missed having you around. Soupmail. Licia :-)
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Richard D Seal
Date: 2/6/2014 5:29:00 PM
Hi Sis, I'm sorta back, still struggling with time at mo. Thanks for comment and your soupmail has been answered :)
Date: 2/3/2014 12:28:00 PM
Wow, Can I borrow your glasses. Richard, a true poem. I do hope this means, you will share your light with us again. This is very deep, and I know it's more than meets the eye. I have the cookie jar open, and I'm happy to see you here. Remember SKAT Wuves You :)
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Richard D Seal
Date: 2/3/2014 7:18:00 PM
Hi Skat, thanks for the comment, I'm getting back in but slowly, I've been so busy the last month. Yeah I know you have the cookie jar, but every time I get near it you pull it further away lol. Take care, Richard
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