Yes, My Love - I'D Die For You

depth of scintillating eyes twitching just to see my barren soul-
your hands MELT over my body as you kiss my somnolent nape;
for my zenith has been met ~ a vestige of your silhouette ~
(embracing evocative dawn before the lithe of dusk)

an aria of light surrounds your aura,
transcending through all that i am and all i could ever be~
you say my beauty, 
                    becoming, 
i say your lips, 
                    soft as chiffon

and

i am the air to your sky,
the push to your shove~
you are the reason i fly
with wings like a dove

sugar-coated smooches with your lips pressed against mine~
strawberry sundae romance with a cherry on top;
                                         ~we created the perfect match~

side by side,
carrying each other through mediocre obscurity;
hand in hand~
we weather the storms in uncharted territory;
a 
mysterious 
love...

           I'D DIE FOR



11.20.19

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 12/22/2019 10:19:00 AM
Congrats on your win, L.L.-- you've hit on the sole criterion for what we call 'true love'-- the willingness to die for the other--because that means you will live for the other. Merry Christmas and a most happy 2020!
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Date: 12/18/2019 3:52:00 PM
Congrats to your winning poem Laura
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Date: 11/21/2019 3:45:00 PM
A wonderful write Laura, exquisite phrasing like only you can do, love and devotion on full display, just how I like it!
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Date: 12/18/2019 1:18:00 PM
thank you so much dear John, sorry for late response, be blessed x:-)-luloo
Date: 11/20/2019 11:38:00 AM
this is gorgeous my friend...one can feel the depths of that beautiful heart in which it came from....love this... hugs :)
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Date: 12/18/2019 1:18:00 PM
I was hoping someone would feel that...thank you lovely lady x:-)-luloo
Date: 11/20/2019 7:51:00 AM
Absolutely enchanting my friend. Love and desire pours form your amorous poem today which lives and breathes for the one you adore.
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Date: 12/18/2019 1:17:00 PM
thank you sweet man! x:-)-luloo
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