Sara Kendrick Poet Acrostic

Yellow Sundress

Y achting on a clear summer day
E agerness was devoid for 'twas afraid
L abel in my yellow sundress frayed
L eans toward vintage but stayed
O blique sailing was his tricky scheme
W ell my Yellow Polka Dot Bikini unseen!  

Sponsor: Francine Roberts
Contest: Here Comes The Sun
Written: February 8, 2014

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Robert Pettit February 11, 2014 at 11:23 AM Reminds me of Brian Hyland's little ditty from over half a century ago (it has been that long!) with its clear descriptiveness. Francine should like this one.

Donna Jones February 10, 2014 at 1:50 PM Yes yes yes.....winner Sara..:-) :-) :-) big smiles your..way.:-) :-) :-) :-)

Nette Onclaud February 9, 2014 at 9:21 AM the sun wil surely wink at that polka dot bikini, sara... i am charmed!.. huggs

Andrea Dietrich February 8, 2014 at 9:08 PM ahha, that last part about the bikini was Awesome at the end!!

Russell Sivey February 8, 2014 at 5:13 PM This is a beautifully well crafted write my friend! I thoroughly loved reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a brilliant (sun inspired) piece, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 8, 2014 at 12:01 PM - Yellow is Cool :))) - Well done,Sara :))) - Luck in contest ! - Wish you a lovely weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode February 8, 2014 at 11:11 AM This is a winning one Sara, gl in the contest.

Tim Smith February 8, 2014 at 11:06 AM This so nice Sara..I love how risqué you are...Hugs Tim