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Yellow Sundress

Y achting on a clear summer day E agerness was devoid for 'twas afraid L abel in my yellow sundress frayed L eans toward vintage but stayed O blique sailing was his tricky scheme W ell my Yellow Polka Dot Bikini unseen! Sponsor: Francine Roberts Contest: Here Comes The Sun Written: February 8, 2014

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Date: 2/11/2014 11:23:00 AM
Reminds me of Brian Hyland's little ditty from over half a century ago (it has been that long!) with its clear descriptiveness. Francine should like this one.
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Date: 2/10/2014 1:50:00 PM
Yes yes yes.....winner Sara..:-) :-) :-) big smiles your..way.:-) :-) :-) :-)
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Date: 2/9/2014 9:21:00 AM
the sun wil surely wink at that polka dot bikini, sara... i am charmed!.. huggs
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Date: 2/8/2014 9:08:00 PM
ahha, that last part about the bikini was Awesome at the end!!
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Date: 2/8/2014 5:13:00 PM
This is a beautifully well crafted write my friend! I thoroughly loved reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a brilliant (sun inspired) piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/8/2014 12:01:00 PM
- Yellow is Cool :))) - Well done,Sara :))) - Luck in contest ! - Wish you a lovely weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/8/2014 11:11:00 AM
This is a winning one Sara, gl in the contest.
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Date: 2/8/2014 11:06:00 AM
This so nice Sara..I love how risqué you are...Hugs Tim
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