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Yellow Moutains

In my back, yellow mountains, glittering with a thousand bursts, Of course, the sun has its incandescent magic God is phosphorescence; his knowledge blinds all dogs and cats, May the night be divine, when I leave my kingdom, Who are we? Camel companions, desert companions, Companions of eagles with millenary greenhouses and pointed, Lost companions, by the splendor of our cities, Who are we? Companions of the blue Bedouins, We know about what only silence teaches us We know only what God wants to hide from us, We are companions of camels in the desert, Behind our backs, yellow mountains, sparkle with a thousand bursts.

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Date: 4/29/2023 6:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your honour of POTW. A wonderful mystic poem - with subtle imageries. Really enjoyed. BW ~ Mala
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Yann Rolland
Date: 5/3/2023 4:28:00 AM
Thanks a lot Mala, I appreciate both reading and comment have a nice day
Date: 4/24/2023 1:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTW yann rolland ! Beautiful write-- Yellow Mountains, has been called the Seas of Cloud, mystical. They are the four natural wonders of China also called Huangshan.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 4/25/2023 6:55:00 AM
Thanks you so much I Am Anaya, i didn't know about wonders of China, will "take a look on Google" have a nice day yann
Date: 4/23/2023 4:17:00 PM
Such vivid images you paint with your words. Spiritually speaking, we should always stay in His light. Congratulations Yann, on Poem of the Week. Many wonderful blessings to you. ~ Brandy
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Yann Rolland
Date: 4/23/2023 11:05:00 PM
Thanks a lot Brandy, it is very supportive , have a nice day
Date: 4/23/2023 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. A wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away....................
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Yann Rolland
Date: 4/23/2023 11:06:00 PM
Thanks Paula, it is a surprise you annonce to me , i will care have a nice day
Date: 4/23/2023 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine POTW, Yann. The questions throughout give us much to comprehend. Bill
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Yann Rolland
Date: 4/23/2023 11:07:00 PM
Thanks Bill for the compliment, it is supportive and "helpful" have a nice day
Date: 4/23/2023 6:48:00 AM
Love this imagery-filled write. Congratulations on POTW! :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 4/23/2023 11:12:00 PM
thanks linda, for the kind comment, and thanks a lot to poetry soup for the contest and nomination, have a sweet day
Date: 4/23/2023 4:37:00 AM
Yann, a wonderful poem, congratulations on POTW!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 4/23/2023 11:13:00 PM
thanks Tania, i am very surprised by POTW, i have to see about it have a sweet day
Date: 4/21/2023 7:38:00 PM
WOW! Yann.Magnificent. Take care, Shirley
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Yann Rolland
Date: 4/23/2023 11:14:00 PM
thanks Shirley, it is very supportive and kind
Date: 4/20/2023 6:50:00 PM
You first stanza is just laden with gorgeous imagery, yann. Really, really great verse. Thanks, gw
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Yann Rolland
Date: 4/21/2023 7:26:00 PM
thanks gershon for the touching comment have a nice sunday
Date: 4/20/2023 7:20:00 AM
Beautiful just beautiful! A lovely scenery of colors! A fave!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 4/21/2023 7:27:00 PM
thanks a lot kim
Date: 4/20/2023 1:32:00 AM
Really like the "camel companions," trudging along. Elizabeth
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Yann Rolland
Date: 4/21/2023 7:27:00 PM
thanks elizabeth for the lovely comment
Date: 4/19/2023 9:07:00 PM
A terrific poem which captivates the senses! It's in my faves. :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 4/21/2023 7:28:00 PM
thanks a lot evelyn
Date: 4/19/2023 7:34:00 PM
This is an absolutely magnificent poem, and the imagery you've used is quite soothing. Beautiful!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 4/21/2023 7:28:00 PM
thanks alot sotto, very "comforting" comment have a nice day
Date: 4/18/2023 12:57:00 PM
what an interesting poem and remarkable imagery!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 4/19/2023 7:07:00 PM
Thanks a lot Andrea for the supportive comment
Date: 4/18/2023 1:52:00 AM
You just fired my imagination tenfold with this one Yann :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 4/19/2023 7:07:00 PM
Thanks a lot Rose,

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