Yellow Brick

" (Two roads) diverged in a yellow wood and I choose the

            the one less traveled by and that has made 

                              all the difference. "

                                             Quote by - Robert Frost

YELLOW BRICK

Unintentionally urgent,
to choose or refuse,
to flee, to fly
possibly to die.
Excuse: just a child…

The clickety clack
attack of the narrow.
The meeting of strangers
along the way -
both good and evil.

Badly, she wanted to go home.
Bravely, she’d have to pursue
fear, fire, the witching hour.

Apples, red, near the yellow brick -
temptation, thirst, famishment.
Off the path, into dark woods…

Tricks are well-travelled - reveal
weaknesses - coveting, weary, greed…

One could endure the orbs, slapping,
soliciting, addicting; fall asleep, dream…

She’d not a brain in her head, her father said.
Her sister thought her a coward.
Her brother thought her heartless.
Would she listen to the talking heads…

She sighed, did not succumb to temptation…
It was only a bit farther, just around the corner.

This path, though fraught with anxiety
and danger, with pratfalls - dousing
a witch with water, missing her ride…

When she’d suffered, and died to self,
she’d unselfishly cherish her kin ‘til death.

She’s smarter than her years, her dad would say.
How brave you must have been, her sister would praise.
her brother sees, she’s all heart…

The crossroads came
in a most unexpected way -
a whirlwind adventure!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
June 17, 2023 at 6:46 AM
Kim, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Rodrigues Avatar
June 17, 2023 at 3:52 PM
Thank you, Constance :)
Goldsmith Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 2:01 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Yellow Brick" is a fun/write from OZ. Love It. I also wrote on this one. Have blessed day/week...........
Rodrigues Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 8:15 PM
Thank you, Paula! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 10:34 AM
Could be a whirlwind adventure, but the less used road is a sure thing.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 5:43 PM
It is a sure thing! Hugs ~ Kim
Dutta Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 11:15 PM
‘ Badly she…. Bravely,…. fear,, fire….’ Wonderful. Love.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 7:43 AM
Thank you, Anisha!
Baker Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 3:50 PM
Love the quote you chose and the fine poem you've written about it. The main point is to never give up and to keep on keeping on. I like the way you allowed us as reader to see the full circle of actions and rewards. Write On my friend! Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 5:18 PM
Thank you, dear Bill!
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June 9, 2023 at 12:45 PM
Follow the yellow brick road, follow follow the yellow brick road : ). I don't think we in Kansas anymore: ). Love your poem , what a blessing to read your wonderful poems, to find joy, peace and rest in : )
Rodrigues Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 5:19 PM
Love and I sang along! Thank you, Stephan!
Lindley Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 12:18 PM
My good friend, I agree wholeheartedly with Gershon- a brilliant narrative. Flow was great and the descriptive words used super fine. The ending was superb! A fav for me. God bless..
Rodrigues Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 5:20 PM
Thank you so much! God bless you too!
Wolf Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 8:36 PM
Rising to the challenge, both the protagonist of the poem and you, Kim, the poetess! Brilliant narrative. Love it! Thanks, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 9:14 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon!
M  Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 7:46 PM
Wow Kim what an interesting write…l read it a few times. l love the forth verse especially and how you incorporated the “yellow brick” wording in so perfectly to the poem! Great poem….Debx
Rodrigues Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 8:16 PM
Thank you, Deb! <3
Rolland Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 6:33 PM
very touching, difficulty can be the road for some , important to be comprehensive
Rodrigues Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 6:40 PM
Very true! Thank you, Yann!
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