Yeeeeeehaaaaaaaaaa!

This thrill? that can kill……
Ride……..
	Feeeellll the WINDddwindddddddddd
WHIP..whip*~~~~~~~
	your skin.
G forces of sensation
	PRIMEprime the PUMPpump* for the 
s e n s oaaaaaaaaaaaaaaary ~~~
deprived

Air gasping open gilled
	life near.. yet LIFE’S DEATH**…  the razor’s edged path

This thrill? 
This thrill can kill………
Yet, composure,
	s e n sayyyyyyyyyy tion
		vvvviiiiiibrbaaaaatiiiiiiioon

Die! Why die! FLYYYYYYY
RIP! ROAR! RIDE! RIDE*>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
	the wind on this PRETTY UGLY** Harley's skin.
		This heartless surrogate horse
                          without FAIL SAFE**
			R I D E!

* alliteration **oxymorons

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Date: 8/30/2010 5:02:00 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in Charles Henderson's contest "Free For All Do As You Please". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2010 5:34:00 PM
Ya know....somehow, miss fiesty pants....I can see you riding a Harley!!! LOL !!! Great job.......and I love that word vvviiiibrbaaaatiiiion!!!!!!!! Makes my computer jiggle!!
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Date: 8/27/2010 2:24:00 PM
This was indeed a wild ride, Deborah! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/27/2010 1:51:00 PM
Great SOUND EFFECTS in this one, Deb! A big congrats for your win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/27/2010 1:27:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your big win in Charles'c contest.. with this extraordinary piece.. luv it.. TEACH.. enjoy a happy weekend.. am in Mississippi with my son now..luv..
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Date: 8/27/2010 12:35:00 PM
Congrats Deb..I love the presentation..felt like I was flying...BG
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Date: 8/27/2010 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations, Debbie on your 9th place, Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/14/2009 6:20:00 AM
I love the tone^^ love it. This poem has great eeeenergyyyyy.xp i can't wait to go zoooooom zooom after i get my license this yr.lol broom broom zoom zoom!!
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Date: 8/27/2009 11:44:00 AM
im only 13 today thanks
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Date: 8/24/2009 6:29:00 PM
Sounds like fun but I have a difficult time with four wheels. My son wants one and I would rather see him walk than taking off on a crotch rocket (NINJA). Vince
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Date: 8/17/2009 1:19:00 PM
Can just about see you in my mind's eye.....helmet, black leather....hair wild.... freeeeee as the wind! You go girl !!!
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Date: 8/12/2009 3:10:00 PM
Yeeeeeeehaaaaaa! Free as the breeze on your HARLEY!!! How could I miss the thrill, the chill, the wind, the G forces sensation if not a roller coaster, it must be a motorcycle.... HARLEY! Come on, Deborah!!! Tell me, please!!! LOL.. Fun!!! Dane
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Date: 8/12/2009 2:36:00 PM
Deborah, Those mechanical bulls can be heartless!!! Do they have mechanical horses, too? Or did I miss this all together? Have fun!!! Always, DAS-J
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Date: 8/11/2009 2:19:00 PM
Wow...simply WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWONDERRRRRRRRRRRRFULLLLLLLL!!!!!!!! Nice work you put on this one, love it, faved.
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Date: 8/11/2009 12:59:00 PM
aww a great poem, thanks for your kind comments on my poem the gift of life, thanks for the idea of the war theem contest, I wrote a poem some time ago titled what are they realy fighting for, God warned us in the bible of wars and this is what he said, Mark 13:1-23 When you hear of wars and rumors of wars, do not be frightened; those things must take place; but that is not yet the end.8 "For nation will rise up against nation, and kingdom. God bless you from diane
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Date: 8/10/2009 4:06:00 PM
Good and fdun poem to describe joy, good job amd nice xomment you left me awwww... -edde
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Date: 8/10/2009 1:16:00 PM
"Yeeeeeeeeeeeeehaaaaaaaaaaa" indeeeeeeeed!!! What a "RIDE"!!! hehe...A hyper ride :)...Thank you for the warm comments...Sara...
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Date: 8/10/2009 6:15:00 AM
What a wonderful way to start a new week reading your new poetry Deborah.Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2009 5:08:00 PM
Wiiii :D:D:D this is purely energetic @@ jojojo I felt like running into walls :D:D:D jojojo wanna join me?:D:D and thanks for the comment jojojo I know of no Alice in my family, maybe I knew here from somewhere @.@ I'll tell you if I get to know about it wiii :D yeah:D:D
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Date: 8/9/2009 3:05:00 PM
Interesting . Sara
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Date: 8/9/2009 2:37:00 PM
good mood? enjoyed.. this was great, not just saying that. Enjoy your day.
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