Debbie Guzzi Poet Free verse

Yeeeeeehaaaaaaaaaa!

This thrill? that can kill……
Ride……..
	Feeeellll the WINDddwindddddddddd
WHIP..whip*~~~~~~~
	your skin.
G forces of sensation
	PRIMEprime the PUMPpump* for the 
s e n s oaaaaaaaaaaaaaaary ~~~
deprived

Air gasping open gilled
	life near.. yet LIFE’S DEATH**…  the razor’s edged path

This thrill? 
This thrill can kill………
Yet, composure,
	s e n sayyyyyyyyyy tion
		vvvviiiiiibrbaaaaatiiiiiiioon

Die! Why die! FLYYYYYYY
RIP! ROAR! RIDE! RIDE*>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
	the wind on this PRETTY UGLY** Harley's skin.
		This heartless surrogate horse
                          without FAIL SAFE**
			R I D E!

* alliteration **oxymorons

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 30, 2010 at 5:02 AM Congratulations Deb on your win in Charles Henderson's contest "Free For All Do As You Please". Love, Carol

Carrie Richards August 27, 2010 at 5:34 PM Ya know....somehow, miss fiesty pants....I can see you riding a Harley!!! LOL !!! Great job.......and I love that word vvviiiibrbaaaatiiiion!!!!!!!! Makes my computer jiggle!!

Carolyn Devonshire August 27, 2010 at 2:24 PM This was indeed a wild ride, Deborah! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich August 27, 2010 at 1:51 PM Great SOUND EFFECTS in this one, Deb! A big congrats for your win. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 27, 2010 at 1:27 PM Congrats Debbie on your big win in Charles'c contest.. with this extraordinary piece.. luv it.. TEACH.. enjoy a happy weekend.. am in Mississippi with my son now..luv..

Barbara Gorelick August 27, 2010 at 12:35 PM Congrats Deb..I love the presentation..felt like I was flying...BG

John Freeman August 27, 2010 at 11:10 AM Congratulations, Debbie on your 9th place, Agape, Moses

Lynette Chachere September 14, 2009 at 6:20 AM I love the tone^^ love it. This poem has great eeeenergyyyyy.xp i can't wait to go zoooooom zooom after i get my license this yr.lol broom broom zoom zoom!!

James Christian August 27, 2009 at 11:44 AM im only 13 today thanks

Vince Suzadail Jr. August 24, 2009 at 6:29 PM Sounds like fun but I have a difficult time with four wheels. My son wants one and I would rather see him walk than taking off on a crotch rocket (NINJA). Vince

Carrie Richards August 17, 2009 at 1:19 PM Can just about see you in my mind's eye.....helmet, black leather....hair wild.... freeeeee as the wind! You go girl !!!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen August 12, 2009 at 3:10 PM Yeeeeeeehaaaaaa! Free as the breeze on your HARLEY!!! How could I miss the thrill, the chill, the wind, the G forces sensation if not a roller coaster, it must be a motorcycle.... HARLEY! Come on, Deborah!!! Tell me, please!!! LOL.. Fun!!! Dane

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen August 12, 2009 at 2:36 PM Deborah, Those mechanical bulls can be heartless!!! Do they have mechanical horses, too? Or did I miss this all together? Have fun!!! Always, DAS-J

Davin Math August 11, 2009 at 2:19 PM Wow...simply WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWONDERRRRRRRRRRRRFULLLLLLLL!!!!!!!! Nice work you put on this one, love it, faved.

Diane Christian August 11, 2009 at 12:59 PM aww a great poem, thanks for your kind comments on my poem the gift of life, thanks for the idea of the war theem contest, I wrote a poem some time ago titled what are they realy fighting for, God warned us in the bible of wars and this is what he said, Mark 13:1-23 When you hear of wars and rumors of wars, do not be frightened; those things must take place; but that is not yet the end.8 "For nation will rise up against nation, and kingdom. God bless you from diane

Edward Orozco August 10, 2009 at 4:06 PM Good and fdun poem to describe joy, good job amd nice xomment you left me awwww... -edde

Sara Zahed August 10, 2009 at 1:16 PM "Yeeeeeeeeeeeeehaaaaaaaaaaa" indeeeeeeeed!!! What a "RIDE"!!! hehe...A hyper ride :)...Thank you for the warm comments...Sara...

Carol Sunshine Brown August 10, 2009 at 6:15 AM What a wonderful way to start a new week reading your new poetry Deborah.Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol

Cesar Cantu August 9, 2009 at 5:08 PM Wiiii :D:D:D this is purely energetic @@ jojojo I felt like running into walls :D:D:D jojojo wanna join me?:D:D and thanks for the comment jojojo I know of no Alice in my family, maybe I knew here from somewhere @.@ I'll tell you if I get to know about it wiii :D yeah:D:D

Sara Kendrick August 9, 2009 at 3:05 PM Interesting . Sara

Derrick Burton August 9, 2009 at 2:37 PM good mood? enjoyed.. this was great, not just saying that. Enjoy your day.