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Years Of The Rose

Have I not heard the calling of day's gone by
or sat in careless prose and wondered why?
but years are as the rose
which are but reflections
that no one person knows-

I have sought with wonder
the diamonds in your eyes
but when the memories came
as falling rain
I couldn't help but cry
for my soul was wracked with pain-

The beauty of your heart
is always mine to keep
and knowing so much loss
each day I cannot help but weep-

But hold you close I always will
the beautiful star you are
for I know that no matter how far
each day I will love you still-


'' My verse was inspired by the lessons I have learned in this life....A canvass with so many colors, a book with so many blank pages, Let me be as the rain and nourish those I touch with my writing"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/19/2010 10:29:00 AM
#1 it's marvelous, touching...a tear jerker! really a totla win BUT You are not fullfilling the intent of the contest. Please try again because your write so very well. I'm giving you a 7 & marking it a favorite verse. BUt it must be inspired by another poets writting to be in this contest. Light & Love
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Date: 6/4/2010 5:29:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 6/3/2010 12:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Angel. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2010 4:52:00 AM
Congrats. Nice job. <--Brandon
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Date: 4/27/2010 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Angel. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2010 10:24:00 AM
Many congratulations on having your poetry featured >> James
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Date: 1/17/2010 6:21:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us all here at PoetrySoup this beautiful Sunday morning. Hope to see your poetry posted here for many years to come Angel. Love, Carol
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