Years Later

in the dream of last
night, your hair was dyed
darkest brown (when its
sandy brown was what
I knew) but I loved

you still. you looked
at (and through) me
with still-blue eyes
that spoke the chance

I lost once,
long before
I even

knew what
I had

missed

but

you reached
out arms

I could but
hope ached as
mine had ached

embracing fear
(that was my soul)
and holding peace
despite the truth

that I failed to see
(or I did see, but
would not believe):  that
you changed your hair but
still did not love me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 4/23/2009 11:32:00 AM
A nostalgic ending really makes this one. Thanks, enjoyed it.
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Date: 10/10/2008 4:20:00 AM
Such are dreams, reaching into the deepest part of us. I love how you wrote this, admissions of honesty that make my heart ache for you, for what once was. Awesome write. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/9/2008 4:31:00 PM
Missed you too, hun. :) And btw, i meant to say MIRROR effect, not mirrow, whatever that means. lol XO
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Date: 10/9/2008 4:19:00 PM
I am glad you caught my form - it should maybe be called diminished/augmented hexaverse? lol. Thank you for the kind words and my condolences to you... Ive missed you!
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Date: 10/9/2008 4:13:00 PM
Tracey! lol I asked you to please post more poetry in your blog, but, it turns out, you already had! DOH! Excellent double - backtoback dem.hex, baby! Yeah! Love this! Only you would think of doing this mirrow effect, beautiful - sad, but extremely awesome. sigh., love me
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