Years Later

in the dream of last
night, your hair was dyed
darkest brown (when its
sandy brown was what
I knew) but I loved

you still. you looked
at (and through) me
with still-blue eyes
that spoke the chance

I lost once,
long before
I even

knew what
I had

missed

but

you reached
out arms

I could but
hope ached as
mine had ached

embracing fear
(that was my soul)
and holding peace
despite the truth

that I failed to see
(or I did see, but
would not believe):  that
you changed your hair but
still did not love me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Mattia Avatar
April 23, 2009 at 11:32 AM
A nostalgic ending really makes this one. Thanks, enjoyed it.
Winter Avatar
October 10, 2008 at 4:20 AM
Such are dreams, reaching into the deepest part of us. I love how you wrote this, admissions of honesty that make my heart ache for you, for what once was. Awesome write. Love, Shar
Reynolds Avatar
October 9, 2008 at 4:31 PM
Missed you too, hun. :) And btw, i meant to say MIRROR effect, not mirrow, whatever that means. lol XO
Decker Avatar
October 9, 2008 at 4:19 PM
I am glad you caught my form - it should maybe be called diminished/augmented hexaverse? lol. Thank you for the kind words and my condolences to you... Ive missed you!
Reynolds Avatar
October 9, 2008 at 4:13 PM
Tracey! lol I asked you to please post more poetry in your blog, but, it turns out, you already had! DOH! Excellent double - backtoback dem.hex, baby! Yeah! Love this! Only you would think of doing this mirrow effect, beautiful - sad, but extremely awesome. sigh., love me
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