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'yearning To Just Be'

thoughts convey internal battle between my heart and mind respite my only wish when confusion strikes, I long for stillness serenity to exhale and just be Written by: Wilma Neels In honor of MJF's "Double Tetractys" ©111120111455

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/5/2011 8:36:00 PM

You express what we long for Wilma. Beautifully said!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/28/2011 10:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Michael's "Double Tetracty's" contest Wilma. Love, Carol

James Rasmusson

Date: 11/26/2011 6:57:00 AM

And congrats to you for YOUR WIN in Michael’s ‘Double T’ contest. Well deserved! ~James MeanderthalMan

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/25/2011 8:53:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on a great big win for this marvelous entry.. your words always so touching luv..

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/25/2011 8:02:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Wilma. Beautifully written. Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/25/2011 8:49:00 AM

This one is so nice, I don't know how I missed it. Congrats on your win!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/25/2011 7:12:00 AM

Your poem is a beauty, Miss Wilma. t o just be is where it is at and at times is difficult to do. Lovely poem and congratulations to you luv. ... ....well breakfast was almonds, banana and peach pie for desert. I don't know if it was healthy but sure was tasty! Working today? have a great great day Wilma....

David Williams

Date: 11/25/2011 6:30:00 AM

Wilma many congrats on your win..love the picture..David

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/25/2011 5:35:00 AM

My dear sweet Wilma, you stand in a light all your own... An Angel that shines like an everlasting candle... In Poetry and in life...my love always sent to you on a day to day basis... love Michael

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/13/2011 9:44:00 AM

Whooosh~ I am exhaling right now-- this is a refreshing read-- I needed that, missy :D best of luck in Michael's contest :D mwahugs and ooh wee~ now you got me wondering!! thank you hugs in advance :D

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/11/2011 4:47:00 PM

* “Most All Long for This Aside Still Waters * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Wilma * Although, Very Few Could Express Its Longing As Beautifully As Loveliness Has Just Done * There Is Sooo Much Beauty Amid Gentle Softness * You Are Beautiful * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *

Tim B

Date: 11/11/2011 12:06:00 PM

Well done Mrs. Wilma, I think we all share these feelings sometimes. God can offer such serenity. Best of luck in the contest!

Kash Poet

Date: 11/11/2011 9:58:00 AM

This is a wonderful Tetracys Wilma.Nice use of the form.Best wishes in Michael's contest.

Tony Lane

Date: 11/11/2011 8:13:00 AM

This is beautiful Wilma. Tony