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Year of the Stingray

Looking at an old photo of myself at age 13, I see a girl, rail-thin, but on the verge of womanhood. Her hair hangs in long pigtails and she wears a modest top with shorts as she sits posing on her brand new bike, grinning happily at the camera. The purple bike in that picture was a Schwinn Stingray. Not just any bike, this one had high handlebars and a banana seat. It was just about the hottest property of any kid my age at that time in the late 60’s when Stingray was at its pinnacle of popularity. In our family of ten, Dad worked hard just to pay the bills. Our bikes were second-hand, and I never had one all my own. My new bike, therefore, represented for me, a summer of very hard work! I’d spent a good part of my summer vacation that year peddling greeting cards, even Christmas cards, door to door. Each day I’d walk many blocks in the humid heat of our hilly town, knocking on the doors of folks with no interest in ordering boxes of cards. Some days I'd hardly get any sales at all, and always my profits were small. Toward the end of my summer, a few large, painful boils appeared on my arms, and I suppose they were evidence of the stress of my many hours walking. However, I persevered, and at last I prevailed! How proud I was to finally walk into the bicycle shop and lay down on the counter my $45 I’d worked so hard to earn. Never again did I have to borrow a family member’s bike. With my purple Stingray, I could get across town to the Weed Park pool in a quarter of the hour it normally took me to walk that distance. Through all of junior high. that Stingray was my companion when I would breeze down the long hill of Eighth Street to my school and then have to trudge that hill on foot walking my bike to get back home! Sometimes I would just take it out for fun, but mostly I used it to ride over to friends’ houses or take it downtown, parking it near stores while I shopped for 45’s, clothes or cosmetics, the new items slowly replacing my thoughts of bicycling and play as I began making money more easily babysitting or picking berries in summer. My 13th summer soon became a vague memory with only this black and white picture to show for it. I don’t recall when or if that bike finally gave out on me or whether it just got tossed. But looking again at the photo, I see not just that beautiful Stingray bike, but also a young girl who smiles not just with happiness, but with the pride of working hard for her very first time with an "eye on the prize!"

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Date: 5/30/2012 11:28:00 PM
Soupmail.
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Date: 5/21/2012 3:51:00 PM
Andrea, i like your poem once again, a super nice win;-) Congratulations with your bicycle entry. Have a nice day~PD
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Date: 5/18/2012 4:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "My Bicycle" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2012 10:54:00 AM
congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 5/18/2012 9:49:00 AM
Wonderful and inspiring write......I love this story. Congrats on your win. Hugs
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Date: 5/18/2012 8:29:00 AM
I think this tells a lot about character, hard working and keeping an eye on the prize. I'm sure things have not changed as you have grown up. Congrats on this wonderful poem, Andrea!
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Date: 5/18/2012 8:14:00 AM
Sooo good! I love the ending!
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Date: 5/18/2012 5:44:00 AM
how the hell did i miss this, quite extraordinary winning poem, the fact we get more than just a bike ride here, makes this so special. harry
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Date: 5/18/2012 1:24:00 AM
Andrea congrats on your win from Walton's mountain, good one Mary-Ellen...David
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Date: 5/18/2012 1:06:00 AM
Congratulations this is a lovely story, my second bike I bought by doing a paper round for a couple of years all pink and shiny but I never got to ride it...xx
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Date: 5/18/2012 12:48:00 AM
Very nice... very descriptive... Terry
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Date: 5/17/2012 8:13:00 PM
Congratulations on a great win. How happy you must have been. Great memories. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/17/2012 7:17:00 PM
I could just imagine you sitting there staring at the photo and writing along as the memories flooded your soul...what a powerful narrative of a young gal's determination peppered with wonderful descriptions...Congrats on your win, Andrea. :) Gwendolen
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Date: 5/17/2012 7:17:00 PM
I could just imagine you sitting there staring at the photo and writing along as the memories flooded your soul...what a powerful narrative of a young gal's determination peppered with wonderful descriptions...Congrats on your win, Andrea. :) Gwendolen
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Date: 5/4/2012 12:32:00 PM
somewhere a grandchild is asking where that old rusty bike came from. and the answer would be that was your moms first bike. i keep it around because it reminds me of when she was thirteen.
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Date: 5/2/2012 1:38:00 PM
This is a very interesting story, as I often reflect back to my childhood memories. Thanks for posting, I enjoyed it.
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Date: 5/1/2012 4:15:00 PM
I had a bicycle with a bannana seat,too. Also I had a ten speed bicyle stolen once. I like the style of this poem. I worked with a student from China today and he said in China they eat dogs and donkey meat! Do you know about any valuble web sites for ESL? Kenneth Beare has a lot of ESL information on his website. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/1/2012 1:40:00 PM
loved this loving tribute to your stingray, my friend - as you say, having worked hard for it, probably made it all the more precious to you
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Date: 5/1/2012 9:50:00 AM
it's a good story, but I prefer your poems. soupmail
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Date: 5/1/2012 2:16:00 AM
What I know for sure is that if you want to have success, you can’t make success your goal. The key is not to worry about being successful, but to instead work toward being significant – and the success will naturally follow… If you do work that you love, and work that fulfills you, the rest will come. Beautiful inspirational story. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 5/1/2012 12:16:00 AM
Love this story of your Life Andrea.It's nice to know how you hardworked to buy your bike.
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Date: 5/1/2012 12:08:00 AM
Good to feel into the memory you've shown us Andrea.) good to know you here on the soup."
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Date: 4/30/2012 9:15:00 PM
Hi Andrea,, lol.. don't you just love that Robert.. and his rhyming comment.. he's awesome.. guess what..I'm all burned out now.. I read this one last night or was it this morning. I can't believe my comment did not print.. you know me..If I'm on line and i did not fall asleep on my computer. I will search for your latest poems. And i was having fun here last night. always~ I'm glad you liked my bike entry. I sure like your bike memory. Well the bit you have here. I never worked for my bike~lol
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Date: 4/30/2012 11:52:00 AM
I enjoy these trips down memory lane. Where life is spoken sweet and plain. A peek inside a friendly past. Where it seems only the pictures last.
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Date: 4/30/2012 11:14:00 AM
a wonderful memory, beautifully penned! i very much enjoyed reading this.
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