Joanna Daniel Poet Concrete

Yacht

A

                                      Small

                                        YACHT

                                          SAILING

                                           In the wide

                                            Ocean, sails

                                           free, flapping

                                        In the sea breeze

                                      Inching forward slow

                                    For catching tons of fish

                                 Wind propelling                          
Three men travelling on the yacht, letting the sea breeze hit their faces

     Facing the sun, they forge ahead, toiling to keep the yacht afloat

           Fishing over, they turn towards home in their small yacht





15th February 2023

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Valsa George February 16, 2023 at 8:34 PM Congratulations on your first place win !

Valsa George February 15, 2023 at 7:23 PM Your creativity is admirable Jo. Love it . May the three men in the yacht, get a lot of fish ! Really enjoyed !

Christuraj Alex February 15, 2023 at 6:20 PM Lives and livelihoods on the sail. How lovely feeling! Great writing.

John Watt February 15, 2023 at 11:48 AM Jo, very artistically crafted into the silhouette of a sailboat, your words also artistically arranged to describe the day of three fishermen. Delightful.

Sotto Poet February 15, 2023 at 9:10 AM How lovely and imaginative, Jo. This was quite entertaining for me.

Heidi Sands February 15, 2023 at 6:02 AM So nice and creative Jo. I enjoyed this :)

Victor Buhagiar February 15, 2023 at 1:22 AM You are very adept at forming poetic shapes. Plus a lovely poem too.

Mystic Rose Rose February 15, 2023 at 12:41 AM I got to enjoy the experience in the boat aside your poetry, beautiful