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Yacht

A Small YACHT SAILING In the wide Ocean, sails free, flapping In the sea breeze Inching forward slow For catching tons of fish Wind propelling Three men travelling on the yacht, letting the sea breeze hit their faces Facing the sun, they forge ahead, toiling to keep the yacht afloat Fishing over, they turn towards home in their small yacht 15th February 2023

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Date: 2/16/2023 8:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win !
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Date: 2/16/2023 12:02:00 PM
Wow, great shape - way outside of my skill set :)
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Date: 2/15/2023 7:23:00 PM
Your creativity is admirable Jo. Love it . May the three men in the yacht, get a lot of fish ! Really enjoyed !
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Date: 2/15/2023 6:20:00 PM
Lives and livelihoods on the sail. How lovely feeling! Great writing.
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Date: 2/15/2023 11:48:00 AM
Jo, very artistically crafted into the silhouette of a sailboat, your words also artistically arranged to describe the day of three fishermen. Delightful.
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Date: 2/15/2023 9:10:00 AM
How lovely and imaginative, Jo. This was quite entertaining for me.
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Date: 2/15/2023 6:02:00 AM
So nice and creative Jo. I enjoyed this :)
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Date: 2/15/2023 1:22:00 AM
You are very adept at forming poetic shapes. Plus a lovely poem too.
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Date: 2/15/2023 12:41:00 AM
I got to enjoy the experience in the boat aside your poetry, beautiful
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