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Wesley Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 5:51 PM
The title looked like fun and so it is. great rhyme and some silliness I needed today as I have the flu.
Lane Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 7:14 AM
Merry Christmas Clay. This is very funny.
Haick Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 8:10 PM
Hey Clay, Thanks for reading "Priceless Gifts". I missed this the other day..I've not been lucky to see an owl outside of a zoo..What inspired you to write this poem? Love, Annalise
Robbins Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 11:02 PM
Anne Lise, I'd say my inspiration was not really so very overwhelming. After sharing my Won't You Adop One Long Term Companion with an audience, I was challenged by a fan to write about a cat (his favorite animal pet) the owl portion of the rhyme was inspired by that 19th century rhyming tale by LEAR, the owl and the pu$$y cat. A bit of irony here; in the 48 hrs. where i was giving thought to this idea of rhyming the owl vs. the cat, i did see two owls in flight in the wee hours of the night, two nights in a row...
Andresen Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 1:26 PM
SWEET one her.... OXOX hugs Anne-Lise
Andresen Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 2:15 PM
Thank goes back to you. And welcom back to my poem. hugs Anne-Lise
Robbins Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 1:58 PM
Oddly as I was giving thought to rhyming the 'OWL' word I saw in the wee hours two owls in as many nights. For this mega-metopolis, the San Francisco Bay Area, I can't recall having seen more than the occasional owl once every few years. Thanks Anne Lise for taking time to read and comment on this piece. oxox - back at you.
Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2011 at 11:39 AM
haha. the litter box line. sometimes our cats' boxes get that way. Cute poem, clay.
Robbins Avatar
December 25, 2011 at 2:00 PM
thinking about the odor of the unkempt litter box is hard on my tear ducts...
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