Andrew Crisci Poet Haiku

Xox World

Apples like red hearts, 
soak up sunshine to taste sweet...
their color's passion.

Lovers' hands will feel
tenderness beneath their skin...
the joy of dreamers. 



P.S.- LOVE- Andrew Crisci

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Andrea Dietrich January 16, 2012 at 4:50 PM wow I see how this one landed on the top. Apple red and sweet as candy. Congrats on your win, Andrew

Carol Sunshine Brown January 16, 2012 at 1:23 PM A belated congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Valentine HAIKU" contest Andrew. Love, Carol

Christopher Bunton January 13, 2012 at 4:17 PM Congratulations!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 13, 2012 at 3:06 PM CONGRATS ANDREW ON A GREAT FIRST PLACE WIN ...

Audrey Haick January 13, 2012 at 12:58 PM Beautiful Senryu, Andrew! Congratulations on your very deserving First Place win! Love, Annalise

Valerie Sherman January 13, 2012 at 8:11 AM Awesome win Andrew!! Well done..

Gwendolen Song January 13, 2012 at 4:18 AM Red apple hot! Congrats on this first place win, Andrew! Gwendolen

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 13, 2012 at 1:42 AM Very nice Andrew, Congratulations on your win x

David Williams January 13, 2012 at 1:20 AM Andrew congrats on yuor win, excellent..David

Greg Stanley January 12, 2012 at 10:54 PM Andrew, Just perfectly written, such a wonderful sense of the beauty of the world around us, Congratulations on your BIG 1st place win, Greg

Poet Destroyer A January 12, 2012 at 9:23 PM Andrew, I fell in love with your set of haiku's, the first and second time I read them... Congratulation, on your first place in my contest. Thank you for charming up nature. Have a good night,..always,..p.d.

Robert Pettit January 12, 2012 at 9:13 PM Beautifully written. No wonder PD chose this one number one in her contest. Congratulations.

Andrew Crisci January 2, 2012 at 12:40 PM Happy New Year to you, Destroyer Poet! You can use it as an example...you have my permission! Thanks for your comments. Best wishes for health, love and happiness. Hugs, Andrew.

Poet Destroyer A January 2, 2012 at 9:44 AM Oooo..wow... Can I use this as an example instead of mine... Love it..pd