Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Vogon Poetry

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14.01.2025
Anne-Lise Andresen
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                             My devilish mausoleum painted
                                with bloodcurdling remains
                               Cobweb gives spine-tingling
                                     in mummified body
                                              Tonyx
                             The knowledge of necromancy
                                         - unknown X ?

                                 Macabre beasts, tyrannize
                                      a world of exorcism
                                       Anti depressants ! 
                             The galaxy grows cold and poor
                                  GoRe, gorE ... GoOOOre
                                      - destroy the planet
                                  Haunted xanadu didilduX

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Duke Beaufort January 21, 2025 at 1:39 PM Anne-Lise, I had to do a little research to find out what Vogon poetry is. I guess I am somewhat uneducated and naive in some areas. You've done a great job here and you could get a job doing this if you wanted...but if I know you at all, I'd say this is a one off. Good for you though to try this out. I give you a lot of credit and send many smiles your way!

Linda Alice Fowler January 17, 2025 at 7:11 AM Eery and ogreish...don't want to walk through that mess! Yikes! Good one Anne-Lise. :) Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2025 at 7:31 AM :))) - hugs

Ink Empress January 16, 2025 at 5:44 AM Dear anne lise! Such a thought provoking and deep take on this type of poetry: the world seems scary with so many health challenges and more, anti depressants too arent helpful enough to endure the goriness of some things in life! Pleasure reading you always! Im sure this will be a winner! Best wishes for the contest.

Yann Rolland January 16, 2025 at 1:59 AM a scary world, for me, nicely done and inspiring, thanks anne lise

Victor Buhagiar January 16, 2025 at 1:49 AM Brilliantly crazy poem I'm not sure I would be able to write one. Best for a win. Hugs.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh January 15, 2025 at 10:46 PM A nightmarish landscape,enjoyed reading.

Evelyn Judy Buehler January 15, 2025 at 8:39 PM Your poem is spooky and fun, Anne-Lise! I loved the ending. Best of wishes for the contest. hugs :)

Joseph P. DiMino January 15, 2025 at 5:43 PM Blood curdling...love it! Great imagery. Unsettling to say the least.

Jay Narain January 15, 2025 at 10:52 AM A great Vogon poem. Sure winner in nthe contest.

Jennifer Proxenos January 15, 2025 at 9:34 AM Never heard of this type of poetry quite blood curdling. I don't think i could do it but yours seems to have whatever it takes to send chills down the spine, similar to a Halloween scary tale . Very well crafted and created though Anne Lise. Hugs and blessings

John Read January 15, 2025 at 8:35 AM Hi Anne I enjoyed reading your Vogon contest poem, hopefully a sure fire winner. xx Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2025 at 8:40 AM - Thank you, John :) - A strange poem form... I don't know if it's done the way it's supposed to be done :))) - hugs

Hilda Greenhough January 14, 2025 at 8:32 PM Your poem describes the beauty of strange. Good luck with the contest. Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2025 at 1:49 AM - A poem full of nonsense, Hilda ... did it for the contest, a bit of fun to write it... but not a form I'd use in the future :))) - hugs

Tom Cunningham January 14, 2025 at 1:52 PM You rose well to the challenge of the contest theme Anne Lise, must invest in a vogan dictionary so I can understand it lol. Good luck in the contest. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2025 at 1:42 AM - I would like a Norwegian translation so I could understand it myself, Tom :))) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues January 14, 2025 at 1:29 PM You did well for this kind of poetry! Love the screaming of: GoRe, gorE ... GoOOOre - destroy the planet… a rip roaring nonplause ;) Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2025 at 1:44 AM - Thank you, Kim :) - My first Vogon Poetry and certainly my last :))) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2025 at 12:39 PM I really don't understand what this kind of poetry expects from us, but I think your chance for a win is as good as the next guy's! Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2025 at 12:42 PM :))) ... thank you, Andrea :) ... :))) - hugs