Andrea Dietrich Poet ABC

Xanadu's Youthful Zeal - Abc

A burning carnal desire,
     exquisite fire glowing hot,
            is joyful kindling! 
                    Lingering mouths 
                           nourish obsessed passion; 
                                  quivering rapture  
                                        stimulates the unabashed. 
                                                      Voraciousness wreaks
                                                                Xanadu’s youthful zeal!

For Allright Poet's Abc Contest Poetry Contest
ABC form type one as explained at PoetrySoup's "Types of Poems"

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 8, 2015 at 2:14 AM Wonderful write Andrea! Congrats on superb win!

Skat A October 4, 2015 at 6:51 PM Andrea, Congrats on your beautiful win. Love SKAT

Eileen Manassian October 4, 2015 at 12:32 AM Congrats on your win, Andrea. The lingering mouths...my favorite line. Love your use of punctuation here. Perfect in form and content.

Balveen Cheema October 3, 2015 at 11:29 PM Love the whole effect! Congrats Andrea on your win!

Mark Woods October 3, 2015 at 8:42 PM Very well done Andrea, love that first line. Congratulations on the win.

Eve Roper October 3, 2015 at 5:09 PM Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Connie Marcum Wong October 3, 2015 at 4:47 PM I love your third line most in this sensual ABC poem Andrea. I think everyone must have struggled creating this form with a sensual theme. I know I did. Congratulations my friend on you win! #7

Charlotte Puddifoot October 3, 2015 at 4:14 PM andrea, you did a good job here with the form - they're not easy! a very uplifting one, joyful indeed, and you got some nice, subtle rhyme into it - desire/fire kindling/lingering/quivering obsessed/unabashed - congrats on your win in my contest! :)

Sandra Haight October 3, 2015 at 2:50 PM Hi Andrea, stopping back to read your sensual ABC again, and as I predicted in my previous visit and comment, to congratulate you on your win! Sandra

Jan Allison October 3, 2015 at 2:16 PM Dropping back with my congratulations Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie September 29, 2015 at 8:19 PM Crikey, you do a good job with your poetry Andrea and this no exception - thank you - Lindsay

Joseph May September 28, 2015 at 11:49 PM This is beautiful Andrea....best wishes in the contest...hugs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 28, 2015 at 5:27 AM Andie, love it.. =`) weeeeeee!!!! sensuous and tempting!!~Olive Eloisa =`)

Kp Nunez September 27, 2015 at 6:46 PM Oh...I quibbled over the word "carnal" but with the way you constructed your etheree, it just shouts for the word...Sensual and such nice flow. Poetic sensuality!

Richard Lamoureux September 27, 2015 at 6:16 PM I'm amazed at how good this is considering the limitation o the form.

Jennifer Walker September 27, 2015 at 8:31 AM Hot, hot, hot. My sister the sensual one.

Arthur Vaso September 27, 2015 at 12:33 AM oh la la, need I say more? :)

Matthew Anish September 26, 2015 at 6:47 PM You wrote a find abecedarian poem! Very provocative! Now go comment on my latest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Michael Tor September 26, 2015 at 6:42 PM Excellent fire burned here. You will do well with this write Andrea

John Lawless September 26, 2015 at 4:42 PM Well, Andrea, it seems the chill of fall fanned the flames of the muse....well done.

James Inman September 26, 2015 at 3:02 PM Andrea, well done! I wrote one but it will not be entered how it is.

Jan Allison September 26, 2015 at 12:22 PM Excellent Andrea I'm still struggling to get mine completed - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet September 26, 2015 at 12:12 PM Nicely worded, well written with passion and the talented poetic skills of a master wordsmith. Emile. #7

Miraj Raha September 26, 2015 at 10:24 AM Are you referring to Saturn's moon Titan?The description is top-notch,when a poet like you requires an hour to weave a poem,it shows.And I agree that mastering this form is very difficult.

Daver Austin September 26, 2015 at 10:16 AM Xanadu day is long past for me. Hey, a very stimulating write, dear friend. Reading between the lines, this poem must be x rated.. Fresh and original. Love, daver

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