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Through the open gate I see them go by young girls to old grans yin to balance yang yet to be encompased by wuji Written: November 2019

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Date: 1/1/2020 11:45:00 AM
where are they going through the open fence... why?... so many questions... lovely verse. Well written.
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Beto Riginale
Date: 1/1/2020 1:01:00 PM
that is the whole point, where are they going? I don't know. perhaps to be encompassed by wuji? as with much that I write, the purpose is to raise question(s) in the reader's mind - beto

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