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Wrong Den For Ken

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A rascal up north, poet Ken,
had retired one night to the den.
He woke to the stares
of six angry bears
and fought them all off with his pen.


for the 'Sencleri-limoku' Poetry Contest of Brian Strand

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/1/2021 3:09:00 PM

Good one. Did that pen have an eraser? Congrats on this winner. Sara

Jo Chamberlain

Date: 1/1/2021 2:49:00 AM

Brilliant. Congratulations on your winning placement. Our pens are powerful tools.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/29/2020 3:58:00 PM

cant believe I've not read this gem before lol, many congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/29/2020 9:40:00 AM

LOL, I love it! Works on two levels.

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 12/28/2020 7:24:00 PM

Congratulations on you Top Win, Andrea, for piece with a mighty pen!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/28/2020 8:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. So cute. It is amazing what a good pen can do. Enjoy your win. Today, have joy/blessings................

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/28/2020 3:01:00 AM

Love this. So adorable. Congrats on your winning entry and 1st place. God B L E S S you always sweet lady

John Watt

Date: 12/28/2020 2:28:00 AM

Really clever! Congrats

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/11/2014 4:15:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 7/11/2014 6:52:00 AM

The pen has for long been considered mightier than the sword, when used wisely...as in this case! enjoyable limerick, Andrea! Congrats on your win. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/11/2014 4:52:00 AM

Amazing power of pen Andrea! Congrats on huge win!

Joseph May

Date: 7/10/2014 10:01:00 PM

Congrats on your win Andrea...

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/10/2014 6:55:00 PM

A pen , a sword, a word and courage was heard.. Congrats on your win my friend!!!

Greg Hoffman

Date: 7/10/2014 4:49:00 PM

Well done,this one made me laugh.That must have been one heck of a pen.

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/10/2014 2:20:00 PM

You are truly something else! Lol.. Like a box of chocolates.. Congrats on a great win, Andrea! Hugs.. Arlene

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/10/2014 11:21:00 AM

Andrea :) Congratulations, on your fine win. Thanks for the support :) Enjoy my latest blog ""A True Friend"" if you'd like.... Love Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/4/2013 11:43:00 PM

No animals hurt in the making right Andrea.... luv~ pd

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/4/2013 11:43:00 PM

you are truly good with them limericks... hope Ken's pen was mighty.... should i be concerned about them bears... LOL.... pd

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/16/2012 6:02:00 AM

love this, it is so clever...having problems posting comments, hope you get these...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/22/2012 1:55:00 PM

Got a chuckle with this one..Great tall tale that Ken did tell to you or penned for you to read about his exploits with the bears and here lucky me gets to read about it from your gifted pen..Thanks for stopping by ...Sara

Daver Austin

Date: 3/20/2010 1:12:00 PM

What I mean to say in the comment below is that I like YOUR limerick mucho. daver

Daver Austin

Date: 3/20/2010 1:07:00 PM

I always love to read limericks, but cannot seem to write one, my efforts are always just plain stupid. Carolyn Devonshire asked me to submit a limerick. I came up with this - A rumpety tum ta tum A rumpety tumpety tum A dippity dee and a dippity doo Go rum rum rumpety tum - Love, daver P.S. I like this one mucho.