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Writing With Weeping Words

I thought I knew what this life was for, thought I could go u n s e e n and u n h e a r d- Used to quill with inspiration and more... now I write with WEEPING WORDS. There was a time when I felt the breeze, r a c e through my lungs with no FEAR- Now I fall to my weakened knees, as I g e n t l y wipe away a woeful TEAR. See, I’ve become this CRAZED introvert, someone who needs more p a i n to endure- On the subject of loss, I’m an expert, addicted to hell’s s t r a n g e ALLURE. When the crimson leaflets fall I r i s e, to see a day full of bloodshed- For I cannot take off this DISGUISE, wearing a shroud of a n g u i s h instead. I’ve been to Kilimanjaro and Tuscany, seen the r a g i n g TEMPEST of The Keys- And that blustering storm always follows me, oh, when will these g u s t s of wind cease? Freedom to choose my path and f u t u r e, has been bound and chained by FATE- I need a t h r e a d and a loving suture, not a life full of SHAME and hate. A phantasm of a ghost l i n g e r s with blame, my days of DREAD and t o r m e n t have occurred- Used to be someone with a famous name... now I write with WEEPING WORDS. October 7, 2017

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Date: 10/10/2017 12:13:00 AM
Best wishes and congratulations on your win, Laura ... blessings and keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/9/2017 8:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Laura. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/9/2017 4:38:00 PM
Such a creative display in this wonderfully written write. Congrats
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Date: 10/9/2017 2:26:00 PM
Congratulations, Laura, on your 1st place win for this very emotional 'weeping words' poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/9/2017 1:44:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win in my contest, you truly penned a poem with weeping words, and so creative too !
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Date: 10/7/2017 5:15:00 PM
So many emotional vivid lines. Imagery and thought linger from within- I enjoyed. You'll have to read my entry........... God Bless U and Youzzzz !!!!!!!!!!!!!! '))
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