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Writing with Weeping Words

Memories of guilt fall and spiral down
To fill love's empty soul with its debris
Tormented from sadness I know profound
I've built a funeral pyre my mind will see
Yesterday's desires I've folded in time
To cast on the flames where memories die
Lovers names burn in colored smoke and climb
Dispersing above in an endless sky
These burnt alms donated from my fool's gold 
Are now gray cold ash born from flames that weep
Collected from tears and love that turned cold
From time's burning fires of flames, I reap

    I've wept from my yesterdays that grew cold
    Now lost in ashes as I have grown old


10/5/17 contest End of Form series
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Date: 10/11/2017 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, stunning pen xomo
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Date: 10/10/2017 2:47:00 PM
Beautiful in it's sadness Frederick, congrats on another great write and win!
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Date: 10/10/2017 12:12:00 AM
Frederic - Best wishes and congratulations on your win, my friend ... blessings and keep up the great work! :-)
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Date: 10/9/2017 8:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Frederic, such a sad sonnet . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/9/2017 5:00:00 PM
Congratulations Frederic :)
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Date: 10/9/2017 4:36:00 PM
This write is a beautifully sad and conveys the theme perfectly. Congrats
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Date: 10/9/2017 2:24:00 PM
Such sad thoughts so beautifully conveyed your exquisite Sonnet, Frederick. Congratulations on your top of the podium win. Sandra
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Date: 10/9/2017 1:43:00 PM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my contest with this magnificent poem and I am lost in the music too, well done !
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Frederic Parker
Date: 10/9/2017 2:04:00 PM
thank you, Constance, for all those contests and for your kindness to me and all who participated in them...Frederic
Date: 10/9/2017 12:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Well crafted poem.
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Date: 10/9/2017 10:56:00 AM
Gorgeous. Congrats on your win. Fave.
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Date: 10/5/2017 6:05:00 PM
Oh this is one of the saddest emotional sonnets I have read... youvr surprassed yourself my friend..
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Date: 10/5/2017 4:43:00 PM
how pensive and penetrating is this poem, frederick.. be proud; beautiful!..huggs
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Date: 10/5/2017 4:02:00 PM
You really have taken the theme to heart Frederic and i have tears as the piece of music is one of my very favourites and is to be played at my funeral!:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 10/5/2017 3:31:00 PM
Your words never grow old Frederic, best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 10/5/2017 12:46:00 PM
Yes these are weeping words written here. Yet this is a well written poem. Frederic have a nice day my friend.
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