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Writing with the Master

Like the strokes of an artist’s brush
Painting a self-portrait of my life
The colors are people, events, and experiences
Each stroke flows into the next creating the picture

A step back is needed at times
To observe the full scope of life
To include the essence of my being
Expressing all aspects as one

Without the help of the master creator
I cannot finish this work completely
Knowing not how I will fully evolve
In faith I place my brush into His hand

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Jay Narain Date: 8/1/2025 10:10:00 AM Beautiful thoughtful poem. The self portrait metaphor and its final completion by God is pretty spiritual. Enjoy the weekend. Login to Reply Bill Baker Date: 8/1/2025 4:09:00 PM That spiritual side of me just creeps into so many of my poems, Jay. It's just who I am, my friend. I spend a lot of time praying and meditating each day. Have a pleasant weekend! Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 7/31/2025 4:12:00 PM Fabulous and spiritual words, Bill. I think your metaphor is great and inspiring. As you say, 'write on.' hugs, me Login to Reply Bill Baker Date: 7/31/2025 9:10:00 PM Thanks, me. and hugs for you from me. Bill

Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/31/2025 2:54:00 PM What a great write and picture. FAV for me. So True... We want to steal the pen but He knows best. Have a blessed day writing away............... Login to Reply Bill Baker Date: 7/31/2025 9:11:00 PM Thank you for the kind comments, Paula, and thanks for the FAV. I always get a smile on my face when a poem of mine receives a FAV. Blessings, my friend. Bill

Joe Maverick Date: 7/31/2025 11:06:00 AM Indeed Bill, He even made the material the brush was made from.. Maker of all The one on whom to call.’ Ultimate Father We need look no further.’ Login to Reply Bill Baker Date: 7/31/2025 11:36:00 AM Thank you for the positive and validating comment, Joe. The old saying, "all roads lead to Rome", has been updated ... after looking further down the roads, they all lead to the Source of creation, the Creator God of all that is, was, and will ever be. Have a great week my friend. Bill