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Wandering through verbiage needing a Muse buttress against the blue-lined emptiness toward an expression to portray the day, the gift to uplift this life sprung forth in a 3-ring binder. Titillating thesaurus (....huh?) lends only separation from a pen point. Whats the point? Wearily mundane homonym's whistle through synapses left unfired. Finished? No, I don't think so ... and there's the point ... aha! I can wander and wail and the reward is all in the line whether it rhymes or oozes into oblivion.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/30/2010 10:09:00 AM
Thanks for the win, Deborah!!!
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Date: 1/29/2010 1:19:00 AM
Many congratulations for your success in this contest with this great instrospective reflection on your inspiration and the writing process! Love, carolyn
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Date: 1/28/2010 7:32:00 AM
boy, here is yet ANOTHER one I somehow had missed. It's one of the most imaginative and a well deserved win! LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/27/2010 8:55:00 PM
Very interesting approach to the challenge, Sue :) Really liked your poetic description of "blue-lined emptiness" --keep writing!
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Date: 1/27/2010 6:33:00 PM
:) I enjoyed this one, Sue! I just like it period. Congratulations on your win! -Robert
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Date: 1/27/2010 6:02:00 PM
Oh yes....I do love this.....those last lines cracked me up....(especially the oozing into oblivion part)...where most of our poetry seems to go................zoom and it's gone!! Great job, Sue!! Congratulations on this winning poem!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/27/2010 4:21:00 PM
Congrats Sue on your winning poem in Debbie's contest... well deserved win for a wonderful write... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 9/20/2008 8:46:00 AM
Very clever expressions....smiles*....loved it, so free-flowing... Love, Sara
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Date: 9/19/2008 2:06:00 PM
Made me smile, the age old battle of the poet with his muse. This is awesome my friend, well done. Love Heidie
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Date: 9/18/2008 6:11:00 PM
Amazing write about writing. You are seriously brilliant! You could have gone on too. You make it seem completely effortless. Nicely done Miss sue! Love, Shar
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Date: 9/18/2008 5:20:00 PM
What a creative piece. Coming up with an interesting approach to the topic of writing is a challenge, one your accomplished well in this poem. Good job! Karen
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