Write Me

Read me, tonight delicately; I'm fragile. Read me tenderly, thoroughly; try to understand. Gaze, head to toe, over and into my heart, my soul; see me. Share your discovery; speak softly, sweetly, passionately. Let lips and tongue work together in unison, vocalizing all I long to hear. As hands attentively express, reveal your vision, fountain flowing freely, fully, instinctively. Confide truths onto vellum; stain this parchment with care. Read me, completely, honestly. Then, write me, as I become aware.

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 12/19/2019 5:07:00 PM

Nice descriptions! Congrats!

Hello There
Date: 12/19/2019 11:43:00 PM

Thank you very much, Juliet! :)

Na Na

Date: 12/19/2019 3:33:00 PM

Congrats on your winning poem H.T.

Hello There
Date: 12/19/2019 4:09:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gregory! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2019 2:48:00 PM

wow, what a great metaphor!! Very lovely.

Hello There
Date: 10/2/2019 5:27:00 PM

Thank you very much, Andrea :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/24/2019 9:02:00 PM

I can feel a longing to be understood and connected. This is very good :)

Hello There
Date: 9/24/2019 9:22:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi :)

Silent One

Date: 9/24/2019 1:03:00 PM

How many can actually read us? Very few sadly.... i did enjoy your poem, especially the format of it..

Hello There
Date: 9/24/2019 3:43:00 PM

Yes, it is sad. Glad you enjoyed the poem. I've written very little in this format, so I really appreciate your feedback. Thank you for stopping by, Silent One ~

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/24/2019 11:58:00 AM

An outstanding deep piece. Panagiota

Hello There
Date: 9/24/2019 3:38:00 PM

Thank you so much, Panagiota <3

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/24/2019 7:48:00 AM

This is multilayered, I so enjoyed how it felt sensual as well as intellectual. Hugs Rick.

Hello There
Date: 9/24/2019 3:37:00 PM

Thank you, Rick :) ~ (hugs)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/23/2019 10:40:00 PM

This is lovely and you are definitely a true poet. God bless you :)

Hello There
Date: 9/23/2019 11:16:00 PM

Thank you for the beautiful compliment :')

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/23/2019 7:15:00 PM

such a yearning and desire falling from your pen in this one...love the style and the way you penned this one...simply beautiful :) hugs

Hello There
Date: 9/23/2019 10:26:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra ~ I'm so glad you enoyed this :) hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/23/2019 2:39:00 PM

Hello -Hello There, I sense love in this poem. have a nice day my friend.

Hello There
Date: 9/23/2019 4:53:00 PM

You as well ~ thank you, Darlene :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/23/2019 2:22:00 PM

Passionate words of longing..evoking verses of love--a beautiful write, HT.

Hello There
Date: 9/23/2019 2:30:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay. I always appreciate your visits and kind words :)

Chris Green

Date: 9/23/2019 11:23:00 AM

Fantastic, this one reaches deep into the soul and creates so many avenues for thought. This poem took my breath away, literally. Really well done my friend.

Hello There
Date: 9/23/2019 12:34:00 PM

I really appreciate your feedback. So far removed from my typical rhyming pieces, I'm so pleased you like this :)

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 9/23/2019 11:09:00 AM

This is a different verse I have read tonight. Good one :)

Hello There
Date: 9/23/2019 12:26:00 PM

Thank you, Swetha :)