Write it Down

With this brand-new set of fancy pens,
my kids gave to me on Christmas day.
The note said now you have no excuse,
not to write down what you have to say.

It’s your duty now old man it said,
to tell us of when you were a kid.
Why you chose to walk along this path,
why you made the choices that you did.

You must share with us, all of your dreams,
the ones that did, and did not, come true.
To share with us your words of wisdom,
that perhaps your parents gave to you.

I say heed these few words my children,
for you may come to regret the deed.
Because I’ve been known to ramble on,
and might give you more than what you need.

Let me give you this advice my child,
a few things they taught me in my youth.
You better let a sleeping dogs lie,
Politicians never tell the truth.

Never place your trust in anyone,
when it comes to politics or wealth.
If it makes you happy or feels good,
it’s probably no good for your health.

Never gossip about your neighbor,
don’t loan any money to a friend.
You should never start to do a task,
Without seeing it through to the end.

Always look for a brighter future
remember who you were in the past
You must cherish each and every day
Like it is going to be your last.

No one knows how many days we have,
or what God might have in store for us.
Before he calls each of us back home
to lend our voices to his chorus.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Greenhough Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 12:03 PM
Thanks for this lovely rhyming poem that gives good advice.
Brotherton Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 6:30 PM
Thank you for dropping by Hilda.
Sands Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 10:25 AM
That is nice to receive special pens. This poem is full of valuable wisdom. Well written Jerry :)
Brotherton Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 6:32 PM
Thanks, Heidi. For some reason, I am a red ink Bic pen kind of person. It just seems like my muse appreciates them.
Maverick Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 11:50 PM
True sentiments Jerry..' Doing our best is all We can aim for..And though often we fail We still have to be 'game for'
Brotherton Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 6:33 PM
Appreciate the comment, Joe. Thanks for dropping in. Have a wonderful evening, my friend.
One Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 1:26 PM
The poem beautifully captures the sentiment of a parent reflecting on their past and contemplating the advice they wish to impart to their children. The repetition of "you must share with us, all of your dreams" emphasizes the importance of open communication and passing down family stories and values. The advice offered by the speaker reflects a lifetime of learning and experience. Each piece of wisdom carries a sense of practicality and caution, grounded in the realities of life.
Brotherton Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 6:35 PM
Thanks, Silent One. I always talked about recording the stories that my parents would tell us, but procrastinated until it was too late.
Cunningham Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 1:01 PM
A verse of wisdom Jerry, words to live by. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Brotherton Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 6:35 PM
Thanks Tom
Wolf Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 8:49 PM
This is a treasure, Jerry. Haven't read a better collection of advice/wisdom anywhere that I can remember. FAVE. Thanks, Gershon
Brotherton Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 6:36 PM
Appreciate the kind words and the fav, my friend.
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