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With this brand-new set of fancy pens, my kids gave to me on Christmas day. The note said now you have no excuse, not to write down what you have to say. It’s your duty now old man it said, to tell us of when you were a kid. Why you chose to walk along this path, why you made the choices that you did. You must share with us, all of your dreams, the ones that did, and did not, come true. To share with us your words of wisdom, that perhaps your parents gave to you. I say heed these few words my children, for you may come to regret the deed. Because I’ve been known to ramble on, and might give you more than what you need. Let me give you this advice my child, a few things they taught me in my youth. You better let a sleeping dogs lie, Politicians never tell the truth. Never place your trust in anyone, when it comes to politics or wealth. If it makes you happy or feels good, it’s probably no good for your health. Never gossip about your neighbor, don’t loan any money to a friend. You should never start to do a task, Without seeing it through to the end. Always look for a brighter future remember who you were in the past You must cherish each and every day Like it is going to be your last. No one knows how many days we have, or what God might have in store for us. Before he calls each of us back home to lend our voices to his chorus.

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Date: 3/24/2024 12:03:00 PM
Thanks for this lovely rhyming poem that gives good advice.
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 3/26/2024 6:30:00 PM
Thank you for dropping by Hilda.
Date: 3/24/2024 10:25:00 AM
That is nice to receive special pens. This poem is full of valuable wisdom. Well written Jerry :)
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 3/26/2024 6:32:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi. For some reason, I am a red ink Bic pen kind of person. It just seems like my muse appreciates them.
Date: 3/23/2024 11:50:00 PM
True sentiments Jerry..' Doing our best is all We can aim for..And though often we fail We still have to be 'game for'
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 3/26/2024 6:33:00 PM
Appreciate the comment, Joe. Thanks for dropping in. Have a wonderful evening, my friend.
Date: 3/22/2024 4:12:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your 'pearls of wisdom' that I assume you wrote down with your fancy pens. I especially liked the last two verses. I appreciate the way you told your story in rhyme....a great poetic skill. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 3/26/2024 6:33:00 PM
Thanks Sara. Have a beautiful evening, my friend.
Date: 3/22/2024 1:26:00 PM
The poem beautifully captures the sentiment of a parent reflecting on their past and contemplating the advice they wish to impart to their children. The repetition of "you must share with us, all of your dreams" emphasizes the importance of open communication and passing down family stories and values. The advice offered by the speaker reflects a lifetime of learning and experience. Each piece of wisdom carries a sense of practicality and caution, grounded in the realities of life.
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 3/26/2024 6:35:00 PM
Thanks, Silent One. I always talked about recording the stories that my parents would tell us, but procrastinated until it was too late.
Date: 3/22/2024 1:01:00 PM
A verse of wisdom Jerry, words to live by. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 3/26/2024 6:35:00 PM
Thanks Tom
Date: 3/21/2024 8:49:00 PM
This is a treasure, Jerry. Haven't read a better collection of advice/wisdom anywhere that I can remember. FAVE. Thanks, Gershon
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 3/26/2024 6:36:00 PM
Appreciate the kind words and the fav, my friend.

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