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Write a Footle

Prim and improper
Cat House
Nine lies


For Judy Cronos's Footle contest

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Paul Callus

Date: 8/22/2014 9:32:00 AM

This is good, Richard (and I am not lying); pity about the end rhyme! [Still trying to catch up with people and writes after an enjoyable holiday.] // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/16/2014 7:30:00 PM

Very very well done Richard!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/15/2014 11:41:00 PM

hmmmm, better be the other one that is in the contest. This is nice but not a footle!

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/15/2014 3:13:00 PM

Nicely done Rick... GL in the contest... Verlena

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/15/2014 3:20:00 PM

I took this one out of the contest because I failed to rhyme the end words. I still like the poem irregadless of following the form.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/15/2014 10:44:00 AM

Been reading some wonderful Footles today,,this is up there with the best

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/15/2014 10:56:00 AM

Thanks Harry, I'm glad you like it.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/12/2014 8:14:00 AM

Prim and improper is that the title as it seems the part of the footle. Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/13/2014 9:42:00 AM

Yes it is the title. For the contest we were asked to have "Write a Footle" as the title.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/12/2014 8:12:00 AM

:) Hey!! You are the man!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/13/2014 9:43:00 AM

;0)

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 8/12/2014 6:34:00 AM

So difficult to add meaning to just three little lines----but you did it again--it's a winner Richard !

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/12/2014 8:07:00 AM

Thanks Jerry. I hope you are right.

Justin Bordner

Date: 8/11/2014 9:05:00 PM

The cost of shame. Lies are ties to treachery. Smart play on words Richard. J.A.B.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/12/2014 8:09:00 AM

This was a fun challange.

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/11/2014 3:30:00 PM

hmm okay... now I am curious about this contest, I must go investigate.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/11/2014 3:34:00 PM

I may get disqualified with this one Casarah.

Tim Smith

Date: 8/11/2014 3:18:00 PM

LOL....we know where your mind is today :)

Tim Smith
Date: 8/11/2014 3:27:00 PM

yes I knew where it came from.....lol

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/11/2014 3:25:00 PM

I hope it is not to daring, I was playing on the cat has nine lives tale. We know that if this fellow gets caught in one of his nine lies, his only life will be shortened significantly.

Write a Footle

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