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Prim and improper Cat House Nine lies For Judy Cronos's Footle contest

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Date: 8/22/2014 9:32:00 AM
This is good, Richard (and I am not lying); pity about the end rhyme! [Still trying to catch up with people and writes after an enjoyable holiday.] // paul
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Date: 8/16/2014 7:30:00 PM
Very very well done Richard!!
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Date: 8/15/2014 11:41:00 PM
hmmmm, better be the other one that is in the contest. This is nice but not a footle!
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Date: 8/15/2014 3:13:00 PM
Nicely done Rick... GL in the contest... Verlena
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/15/2014 3:20:00 PM
I took this one out of the contest because I failed to rhyme the end words. I still like the poem irregadless of following the form.
Date: 8/15/2014 10:44:00 AM
Been reading some wonderful Footles today,,this is up there with the best
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/15/2014 10:56:00 AM
Thanks Harry, I'm glad you like it.
Date: 8/12/2014 8:14:00 AM
Prim and improper is that the title as it seems the part of the footle. Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/13/2014 9:42:00 AM
Yes it is the title. For the contest we were asked to have "Write a Footle" as the title.
Date: 8/12/2014 8:12:00 AM
:) Hey!! You are the man!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/13/2014 9:43:00 AM
;0)
Date: 8/12/2014 6:34:00 AM
So difficult to add meaning to just three little lines----but you did it again--it's a winner Richard !
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/12/2014 8:07:00 AM
Thanks Jerry. I hope you are right.
Date: 8/11/2014 9:05:00 PM
The cost of shame. Lies are ties to treachery. Smart play on words Richard. J.A.B.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/12/2014 8:09:00 AM
This was a fun challange.
Date: 8/11/2014 6:54:00 PM
I love how this is just one giant metaphor. Awesome! I've missed your work, and I have missed talking to you. Hope all is well my friend
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/12/2014 8:10:00 AM
Sweet Anne, what a lovely surprise. Yes all is well with me. How about yourself?
Date: 8/11/2014 3:30:00 PM
hmm okay... now I am curious about this contest, I must go investigate.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/11/2014 3:34:00 PM
I may get disqualified with this one Casarah.
Date: 8/11/2014 3:18:00 PM
LOL....we know where your mind is today :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/11/2014 3:27:00 PM
yes I knew where it came from.....lol
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/11/2014 3:25:00 PM
I hope it is not to daring, I was playing on the cat has nine lives tale. We know that if this fellow gets caught in one of his nine lies, his only life will be shortened significantly.