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Wrinkles

Once you see one, damage done; more will come – just smile!
*Entry for Rick Parise’s “Than-Bauk” contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/18/2011 6:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in ^Rick's "Than-Bauk" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/17/2011 12:52:00 PM
I was rushing along there Carolyn, didn't register i was a ( h m ) till later, still a lot in the poem:) and great read to me..!
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Date: 11/17/2011 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations Dear Carolyn on your win here..!
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Date: 11/17/2011 8:53:00 AM
Isn't it the truth!!?....But may as well smile, we have earned every one!!! Congratulations, Carolyn on this clever and enjoyable poem!!
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Date: 11/17/2011 2:14:00 AM
Congratulations this wonderful win in the contest of Rick, Carolyn
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Date: 11/16/2011 7:16:00 PM
So sad but true. Congratulations, Carolyn. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/16/2011 2:17:00 PM
wowie, carolyn, this deserves a placement in the top ten. I think it is one of the very best!!
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Date: 11/16/2011 1:43:00 PM
Carol...Yours is so fun and true..wrinkles equal experience..I prefer this over beauty anytime. Luv, Gwendolen (I would have placed you and Joyce closer to the top tier.)
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Date: 11/9/2011 12:35:00 PM
A very positive way at looking at wrinkles, Carolyn! Bring 'em on! I'm proud to have smiley wrinkles :) -- very nice topic for your than bauk--so hmm no frowns allowed! why the frown? To be honest? I have never made that sweet potato dish as we don't have Thanksgiving here...but yup wouldn't that be cool, a Soup convention where we really cook soup?? haha! hugs :D
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Date: 11/9/2011 5:58:00 AM
You have got this Than Bauk down pat, Carolyn just as intended as it is short climbing and witty also..I went for story form (which is not really what TB is for) but I have fun doing it cause I love the challenge of the form :) This one is tops ...As far as wrinkles.... ya gotta love em . Did not get to your contest on time Catch the ext one
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Date: 11/8/2011 5:13:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one and great theme that we all can understand..Good luck in the contest..Reads like winners' circle to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 11/8/2011 1:19:00 PM
Brilliant as ever Carolyn - good luck in the contest, luv Janette
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Date: 11/8/2011 12:40:00 PM
Precious wrinkles. Wishing you the best in the contest Carolyn. You have years before you get them. Thank you for all your kind comments my dear friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/8/2011 12:10:00 PM
:-) You GO, girl! My once smooth forehead looks like the Grand Canyon now. Ah, well. At least my laugh lines are EVEN deeper. Thanks for the kindness sent my way, Dear. I always appreciate your words. Monkey-girl is doing so much better. Hospital visit was horrible. They did a TERRIBLE job putting in the catheter, told me it would be an in/out thing.Over 3 minutes of her screaming in agony. All this for freaking amoxcylin (spelling)??? Sorry, should have soup mailed this! Hope this wins! Cyndi
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Date: 11/8/2011 11:53:00 AM
I take great pride in every one of my wife's laugh lines. Tony
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Date: 11/8/2011 11:46:00 AM
Witty..witty...very witty:)
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Date: 11/8/2011 11:39:00 AM
very cute. a great way to look at aging - fine lines :p (pun intended!)
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Date: 11/8/2011 11:10:00 AM
LOL, yes, indeed - and laughter lines are better than frown marks : )
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