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Wriggle and a Breath of Air

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gray sky's angry flash it's stomach loud hungry roars earthworm for dinner 6/26/2017

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Chris Green

Date: 6/27/2017 6:09:00 AM

What a wonderful Haiku Eve. This was beautiful.

Eve Roper
Date: 6/27/2017 6:51:00 PM

Thank you so much, Chris, always enjoy your inspiring compliments ~*

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/26/2017 11:32:00 PM

What a haiku, Eve! Amazing!!

Eve Roper
Date: 6/27/2017 6:49:00 PM

Thank you for your inspirational comment, Jo, I'll keep you around ~*

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/26/2017 9:49:00 PM

Yumm with three m's:) Great haiku Mrs Eve:)

Eve Roper
Date: 6/27/2017 6:45:00 PM

Thank you, Daniel,,, I think the birdy like it :) ~*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2017 9:21:00 PM

I love that last line. You got in your juxtaposition!

Eve Roper
Date: 6/27/2017 6:44:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea, just trying... ~*

Jan Allison

Date: 6/26/2017 7:06:00 PM

wonderful haiku Eve and the picture is super:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper
Date: 6/27/2017 6:42:00 PM

thank you so much, Jan ~*

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 6/26/2017 6:43:00 PM

This is very clever. A thought: do you mean "Wriggle AND a breath.."? Just asking.

Eve Roper
Date: 6/26/2017 10:02:00 PM

Dale I'm glad you did, rather you help and just be ignored of my mistakes and feel like an idiot after wards when I find them myself.. So thank you very much

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/26/2017 7:17:00 PM

Just trying to help.

Eve Roper
Date: 6/26/2017 7:09:00 PM

yes your are right, Dale, made me look...

White Wolf

Date: 6/26/2017 6:25:00 PM

Nicely composed haiku, Eve! I love it!

Eve Roper
Date: 6/27/2017 6:41:00 PM

thank you so much, WW ~*