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Sitting poolside, when two adult men throw themselves into the pool,

probably both have had two much to drink. Trying ti drown each other,

being a lot too silly, until they and their two women get thrown out. 

Can anyone say poet fodder!

*Read note for info WRESTLING WHALES the palms over pool witnesses of crass distress waves ripple outward Kim Rodrigues © 2017 SENRYU FORM

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Date: 5/2/2017 11:57:00 PM
Bet that caused waves - when they got beached! Thanks for sharing your experience.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2017 10:09:00 AM
Oh yes! Their blowholes were steaming...lol!
Date: 5/1/2017 4:01:00 PM
good one. I enjoyed your note to go with this too. Fodder indeed!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2017 10:09:00 AM
LOL! Thanks, Andrea!
Date: 4/29/2017 5:58:00 AM
Loved this *big smile*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2017 6:32:00 AM
:)
Date: 4/28/2017 10:56:00 PM
Ha ha ha ... So nice ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2017 6:32:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 4/28/2017 10:22:00 PM
They were having a whale of a time! :-)....Nicely done Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2017 6:34:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2017 6:34:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph
Date: 4/28/2017 8:26:00 PM
poet fodder...lol They should all be kicked out. Good one, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/28/2017 8:41:00 PM
They did get kicked out! LOL! Thanks!

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