Sitting poolside, when two adult men throw themselves into the pool,
probably both have had two much to drink. Trying ti drown each other,
being a lot too silly, until they and their two women get thrown out.
Can anyone say poet fodder!
*Read note for info WRESTLING WHALES the palms over pool witnesses of crass distress waves ripple outward Kim Rodrigues © 2017 SENRYU FORM
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