Wrecks On the Nine

Tom took a day off for golf to play
His game should have been simpler croquet
Bruised head and scraped knees
His cart like swiss cheese
Wrecks on the nine, decides game's risque  

Inspired by Craig Cornish's Contest
Not an entry.....
Written: April 1, 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Anderson-Throop Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 10:33 AM
love the rhyme of croquet and risque! Lots of fun....by the way, thanks for being such a faithful reader of my work...your comments are always welcome!
Cavanaugh Avatar
April 5, 2013 at 10:13 PM
enjoyed this limerick. Thank you.
Johnson Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 4:45 PM
Wow, Tom sounds pretty wild. :)
Hunter Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 9:56 AM
Sarah...I've had a couple of crashes on the course...haha. Good one.
Horne Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 10:38 AM
lol, good one, Sara
Sivey Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 6:04 AM
Ha ha, you have such humor my friend! I love that word, risque, not much good comes out of that word I'm afraid...but there is a lot of humor within it though! I believe the funniest part of you poem has to be the cart looking like swiss cheese, that is hilarious! I don't know much about golf, but I can imagine that being something that they hit often...if they aren't that good! This is a fabulous write my friend, I loved reading it this morning! You have enlightened me with this Great Work!!
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