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Wraith of My Soul

twilight whispers on the winds of darkness the wraith of my soul listens assonance of this empty house articulates through walls of dreams where desires call out to you i can hear your inaudible voice answering back see you standing in the shadows of time awaiting the hours of destiny to allow you to step forward into the depths of my awaiting arms for now i rest in fragments of hope and wait for my love unknown to arrive

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Date: 1/4/2020 9:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand’s contest. Hugs Eve
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/4/2020 10:35:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve... hugs :)
Date: 1/1/2020 4:28:00 PM
"for now / i rest / in fragments / of hope". Your poem captures the universality of longing, Sandra. I love, "see you standing / in the shadows / of time". Thanks for sharing this achingly beautiful write. ~ John
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Date: 1/1/2020 7:49:00 PM
Thank you so much John...my best writes always seem to be the pain filled one... Happy New Year... hugs
Date: 1/1/2020 1:04:00 PM
back with my sincere congrats! knew it was a winner x:-)-luloo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/1/2020 7:49:00 PM
Thank you so much my beautiful friend... Happy New Year... hugs and blessings :)
Date: 12/10/2019 11:10:00 AM
amazing as always, I feel the somber solitude. Beautifully expressed my friend, be blessed x:)-luloo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 12:14:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend...a little write that came to me last night... hugs
Date: 12/10/2019 11:00:00 AM
Lovely lil write...sigh...I been waiting 10 years now.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 12:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Robert :)... hopefully one day your wait ends happily ever after...
Date: 12/10/2019 7:11:00 AM
Splendid words articulate the void--and fill in the imagery so inviting. Superbly done, Sandy. May the wishes of awaiting arms be happily fulfilled!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 9:09:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay...i have little faith in that dream but dreams keep us living so the dreams can come all they want... hugs :)
Date: 12/10/2019 7:10:00 AM
There will always be that one, dreaming from afar, waiting in the wings, answering in soft echoes and your heart will know it is true. Beautiful my friend, a whisper poem that sings in soft tones of desire and affection. Sigh! Amazing poetry.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 9:07:00 AM
Thank you so much Chris...this came out of nowhere 10 minutes before bed...i think the weather whispered to my muse, this one sort of wrote itself... Good morning my friend... hugs :)
Date: 12/10/2019 4:07:00 AM
Anticipation of the soul that yearns the love of a lifetime that is so tenterly expressed in the most romantic way! Excellent dearest, Sandra. Hugs xxx
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 9:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Demetrios, your comments are always so uplifting my friend :) hugs
Date: 12/10/2019 2:32:00 AM
- Beautiful poem, Sandra ... accept the love with open arms - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 9:00:00 AM
Thank you my friend... certainly if it arrives...hugs
Date: 12/9/2019 11:59:00 PM
"i can hear your inaudible voice answering back" - a mystical masterpiece, Sandra. I can feel your unknown love waiting for you in anticipation also.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 9:00:00 AM
Thank you so much Caren...at my age, i have given up finding the soulmate...i think he's awaiting on the other side of life...one day perhaps i will know... hugs
Date: 12/9/2019 11:56:00 PM
Love this beauty, my friend...In the meantime, break out those dancing shoes and show him how you like to sway. Seems he's already found you ;)
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Date: 12/10/2019 8:58:00 AM
Thank you...well if he found me, perhaps he will let me in on his little secret...:) hugs
Date: 12/9/2019 11:06:00 PM
Sandra, I like the arms that wait in your poem. "One day someone is going to hug you so tight that all all of your broken pieces will stick together." -unknown
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 8:57:00 AM
Thank you Richard, what a sweet thing to say... hugs
Date: 12/9/2019 9:26:00 PM
Lovely poem, Sandra.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/10/2019 8:56:00 AM
Thank you Line :) hugs

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