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Poetic Form: Senryu

Inspired: 2024 June 22

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I asked God to jump He asked why ~ see how high ~ WAIT I asked God where's Earth best workplace starts on Monday ~ worst work on weekends luck if work beyond eleven at night to seven in the morning known as graveyard shift (fyi) Carter in office pleasant with the staff and I same as when he left Blessed those passed I pleased acting singers leaders of world and industry

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2024 9:58:00 AM

This was a delight, william

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/23/2024 10:19:00 AM

Twas an in-between break whiles doin tautogram--me 1st, Aloha Andrea

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/22/2024 8:02:00 PM

I’ve worked that graveyard shift at a diner and also in the Navy. It is interesting to stay awake all night while most of the world is asleep.

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/22/2024 8:24:00 PM

I've worked those hours, per se, tho' it affect unions as I'm salaried and being such, I'll take a room & sleep till VIP arr those odd hours--cr**py union rules--helping them seen as taking from them--ugh! VIP's for me as they wait for my instructions. Aloha Kim!!! ;)