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Woven Worlds - Long version

Tumultuous excitement to think of actually having an 
address on the moon. Needing to be quite self sufficient, 
as there will be no ordering Take-Away from ground control.
Prefab housing and inflatable furniture will be all the go.
It will have to be weighed it down, as we don’t want it to get up 
and go with no gravity. Tubes of food and drink, will need 
to be stocked by the mile. Living on the moon will cause 
quite a smile, thanks to those first brave astronauts.
              their mission was soon
                           it was to land on the moon
                                             came more to explore
                               could we build a colony                
      where we could all survive there

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Linda Alice Fowler March 15, 2024 at 7:11 AM Interesting and fun write Wen. I hold a certain fascination of the Moon. GL my friend! :) Speaks Volumes March 15, 2024 at 5:19 PM It was a fun competition .. Not sure if this is on target but I had fun.. Thanx Laf Always love your comments

I Am Anaya March 11, 2024 at 8:35 AM Humorous, creative, I just love everything about this, gives a new world feel, good vibes! A beautiful collaboration you did with Sam Scott, Wen. I'd love to hear your voice recite your poetry, plz. I Am Anaya March 11, 2024 at 6:29 PM Aha, a good reason not to audio. I was searching for woven world stuff. I know she calls for prose and only 0ne Tanka. Best not to knock your work out of the game, some will believe it. I think this is very exciting! I may try it. Speaks Volumes March 11, 2024 at 10:31 AM Lost my voice about 18 months ago dear Anaya. I struggle to breathe most of the time. very few can understand me. All good, my fingers do the talking. this was my best interpretation of Suzettes Contest. I am sure its not what she is looking for but best I could come up with. Thanks for your lovely comment my sweet friend.