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Wounded Winter

The crescent moon lent a possessive tinge to the stratified silhouettes of the wounded Winter sky. The sliver of silver provided the single, solitary, punctuation to an otherwise dreary evening. Soot colored vegetation covered the horizon As dwelling lights flicked on dotting the vista like fire flies in night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/28/2008 1:00:00 PM
wow amazing poem, you use such wonderful metaphors, such beautiful writing. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 12/27/2008 5:22:00 PM
hi Deborah, such a vivid and candid description with metaphors and similies, great write, take care D-nyce
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Date: 12/26/2008 7:30:00 PM
Great poem really enjoyed it.-love and peace james faulkner
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Date: 12/26/2008 4:48:00 PM
Deborah this is another well written poem - you're on a roll - God Bless, MJ
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