Wounded Aphrodite

The rocks tripped me; I trod forward, upward to my lesson. The wind chooses not to make its presence felt, yet. The sun bursts gloriously into the flat, baby-blue, sky. The red brown earth held its moisture greedily. The effort shows in pulse and perspiration, a flush blooms on cheeks unused to color. The house appears abruptly, from a froth of greenery. The wind keeps its distance, as if sensing its presence is not desired. The golden sun valiantly attempts to breach the houses gloom. The guardians of house, home, and ether, leap forth. Stone griffins, stern, etched by acid rain, stand. The earthly hounds dart wraithlike through clusters of cluttering tomes,and out the door to greet me.I enter. The plaster shouts syllables, displaying in a military bent. The house hungers for light, a broom. Her feather-duster fright. The corner china cabinet displays a human skull. Into this room she walks, a spirit of air, scared by storm. God’s sacred light leaps.... only in the instructors eyes; from her disfigured form, blue orbs, full of mischief and the joy of flight, revel.... teacher, a wounded Aphrodite, smiles.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/2/2009 11:30:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Deborah.Thank you for sharing it here at PoetrySoup, where you have become an asset to the site and to us other poets as well. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/2/2009 12:24:00 AM
Excellent work Deborah...Raul
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