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How strong is your love? Should a rather cruel fate befall me; a disfiguring accident robbing me of what first attracted you to me, what you found most sexy about me, my pulchritude. Would you still love me? How deep is your devotion? Suppose I told you I had a checkered past, an uncomfortable truth, a secret I kept from you, dreadfully afraid you'd leave me. Once a troubled youth, now a changed man. Would you still love me? If you fell hopelessly in love with me mostly due to my unshakable faith in God, and we nourished a promise to grow old together, and I somehow lose my faith, doubtful I'll ever regain it. Would you still love me? If I gave in to temptation, a weakness once and only once, even though I love you desperately, and you see it clearly every hour of every day. I swear on my life, to God, to never again repeat my careless mistake. Would you still love me? We had the world on a string. Life with me, so grand, rich, a bed of roses; the future couldn't be more auspicious! If due to circumstances beyond my control, however, it all went belly-up I, the breadwinner, now struggle to support you My darling, would you still love me? Date written and posted: 12/05/2018

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Date: 9/13/2023 1:30:00 PM
Thanks for writing and congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 9/13/2023 2:21:00 AM
This is so lyrical, you really are so talented, i can see why this was a winner on silent ones contest, so good and the flow and rhythm of this as well as the emotions and depth of your lines truly stood out for me. I felt this poem. Congratulations EI
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/13/2023 2:31:00 AM
Thank you very much for the lovely feedback, visit and congratulations, Inky:-) Most obliged.
Date: 5/4/2020 4:14:00 AM
I really enjoyed The reading Pretty tasteful Love so soft Bravo Sir
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Date: 5/4/2020 5:28:00 AM
Thank you, Gideon:-) Stay safe out there, bud.
Date: 12/21/2018 11:59:00 PM
Followed your example. Now it's time to try. Best Wishes.
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Date: 12/22/2018 7:13:00 AM
Good luck, Anisha!:-) Best wishes to you, too!
Date: 12/8/2018 5:40:00 AM
Thanks for the model-poem. By the way, genuine love would give you an affirmative answer. The Lord is the source of such (John 3:16). God bless you.
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Date: 12/8/2018 4:45:00 PM
True indeed! Thanks, Beata!:-)

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