Would Be Humorous Except

An army of vampires, this night’s parade. Paralyzed are the gawking present day minds. Mouths agape, rubbing eyes, a thought that there may be no escape. The sign out front would be humorous except it’s diabolical.

we will be feasting
this Halloween by moonlight 
do join our blood drive

One couple hopes for an alien abduction, seems less threatening at the moment. A cautionary tale, for their wish has been granted. Down comes the ray, lifting them to a giant dinner plate. Trickery, the treat celebrated earlier in the week.

alien vampires
delighted with honored guests
no need for ketchup

10/19/2020
Contest: Halloween Challenge
Sponsor: Emile Pinet

Haiku portion of haibun checked with howmanysyllables.com

Word list: alien, blood, cautionary, vampires, trickery, abduction, paralyzed , Halloween, feasting, diabolical
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Fowler Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 5:53 AM
Fun form to use Kim. I, too, like the last line! Congratulations on the win! Linda
May Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 8:17 PM
"No need for ketchup", love that line Kim, Congrats on your win..:)
Kauffman Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 9:49 AM
Congrats and kudos Kim on your winning placement! This is very unique story well told my friend! Going to have a hard time eating ketchup from now on!
Pinet Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 7:20 AM
Congratulations Kim! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my spooky Halloween contest, well done my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 9:07 AM
Thank you, Emile! :) Yay!
One Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 6:27 AM
Great storytelling Kim.. I think I need to write a Halloween one..
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 7:26 AM
Yes! Look forward to it!
Mcintosh Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 4:24 AM
This is a wonderful poem for this particular contest :) Wow. I love the way you've written it and given such a twisty turning elusive verse within it. God love and bless you sweet lady - I wish you a win
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 4:30 AM
Glad you liked it! You are always an uplifting friend! Thanks!
Cunningham Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 1:30 AM
Lol, perfect for Halloween Kim, good luck in the contest Tom.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 4:29 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Buehler Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 8:20 PM
Delightful Halloween poem, Kim. This is a treat...or maybe a trick. :0
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 4:29 AM
Thank you, Evelyn! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 6:57 PM
You have surpassed the expectations of the contest host I am certain Kim. Expect to see this in the winners box.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 7:04 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Wolf Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 6:29 PM
Do you take type 'Oh-Oh' blood?! lol. ~ Wolfman
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 7:01 PM
Oh-oh no! :)
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