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Would Be Humorous Except

An army of vampires, this night’s parade. Paralyzed are the gawking present day minds. Mouths agape, rubbing eyes, a thought that there may be no escape. The sign out front would be humorous except it’s diabolical. we will be feasting this Halloween by moonlight do join our blood drive One couple hopes for an alien abduction, seems less threatening at the moment. A cautionary tale, for their wish has been granted. Down comes the ray, lifting them to a giant dinner plate. Trickery, the treat celebrated earlier in the week. alien vampires delighted with honored guests no need for ketchup 10/19/2020 Contest: Halloween Challenge Sponsor: Emile Pinet Haiku portion of haibun checked with howmanysyllables.com Word list: alien, blood, cautionary, vampires, trickery, abduction, paralyzed , Halloween, feasting, diabolical

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Date: 11/8/2020 5:53:00 AM
Fun form to use Kim. I, too, like the last line! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 11/7/2020 8:17:00 PM
"No need for ketchup", love that line Kim, Congrats on your win..:)
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Date: 11/7/2020 9:49:00 AM
Congrats and kudos Kim on your winning placement! This is very unique story well told my friend! Going to have a hard time eating ketchup from now on!
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Date: 11/7/2020 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations Kim! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my spooky Halloween contest, well done my friend, Emile.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2020 9:07:00 AM
Thank you, Emile! :) Yay!
Date: 10/21/2020 6:27:00 AM
Great storytelling Kim.. I think I need to write a Halloween one..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2020 7:26:00 AM
Yes! Look forward to it!
Date: 10/21/2020 4:24:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem for this particular contest :) Wow. I love the way you've written it and given such a twisty turning elusive verse within it. God love and bless you sweet lady - I wish you a win
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2020 4:30:00 AM
Glad you liked it! You are always an uplifting friend! Thanks!
Date: 10/21/2020 1:30:00 AM
Lol, perfect for Halloween Kim, good luck in the contest Tom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2020 4:29:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 10/20/2020 8:20:00 PM
Delightful Halloween poem, Kim. This is a treat...or maybe a trick. :0
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2020 4:29:00 AM
Thank you, Evelyn! :)
Date: 10/20/2020 6:57:00 PM
You have surpassed the expectations of the contest host I am certain Kim. Expect to see this in the winners box.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2020 7:04:00 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 10/20/2020 6:29:00 PM
Do you take type 'Oh-Oh' blood?! lol. ~ Wolfman
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2020 7:01:00 PM
Oh-oh no! :)

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