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Worst Morning After

Stop breathing so loud before I smother you dead. Please go make coffee ... don't touch my head. Jose Cuervo last night was my friend but that relationship now must end. No more tequila, no more Karaoke. I can't seem to speak, my voice is all croaky. Last night was a blast, on the table I danced. I drank and I flirted and generally romanced everyone in the bar , they were all friends of mine. At least that was the consensus until closing time. I danced my way home on wobbly legs. Now my poor head it begs and it begs "Don't do it again, behave and be good. No more tequila". If only I could go back once again to last night. I think I would just have ordered a Sprite. 09/07/2013 for Susan's "Worst Morning After" contest

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Date: 3/19/2014 12:47:00 AM
From seeing the previous comments, I see you won in somebody's contest with this entry. You had a better morning after than the passengers of the SS Poseidon. They had to fight their way to the bottom of the ship.
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Date: 8/5/2013 10:19:00 AM
great. Congrats on a great win. (:c Jenish
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Date: 8/2/2013 9:39:00 AM
good gosh, are you my clone, Francine. Or am I yours?? WE did almost the same person here. hahaha. BIg congrats. I love this.
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Date: 8/2/2013 9:11:00 AM
Hahaha, I love it!! Congratulations on a well-deserved win, Francine. Cheers, mate (clink, clink). Licia :-)
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Date: 8/2/2013 5:10:00 AM
Lovely poem! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/2/2013 4:22:00 AM
super poem congrats on win Shadow smiles
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Date: 8/1/2013 11:03:00 PM
congrats....SKAT
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Date: 8/1/2013 9:57:00 PM
Francine, , congratulations in Susan's "Worst Morning After..." contest. take care. xox~ LINDA...
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Date: 8/1/2013 10:13:00 AM
Sprite spiked with Senor Cuervo I assume?...Hair that bit the dog you know (Just what the heck does that mean anyway?) Congrats my friend and bottoms up - Tim
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Date: 8/1/2013 10:08:00 AM
congrats on your win Francine....
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Date: 7/24/2013 1:48:00 PM
Sprite is better than tequila! nice & funny
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Date: 7/21/2013 8:58:00 PM
Made me smile! nice!
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Date: 7/16/2013 10:28:00 AM
Very creative, funny and entertaining, my friend. But, who are you kidding? We never learn - because as bad as the morning after is, it is the night before that begs for more.
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Date: 7/14/2013 1:08:00 AM
hahaha. that last line was priceless. a sprite!! I think this is JUST what the doctor ordered, and the doctor in this case is Black eyed susan!
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Date: 7/10/2013 12:48:00 AM
Just to cute...my head hurts just reading it...BG
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