Worst Fear

I’m back in my childhood’s home 
in its dank and dismal cellar
walking warily, unsteadily down
                                        ancient 
                                         narrow
                                          stairs.
The old-time wash machine with wringer
stands there in       the center             of the gloom
as I remember well it always used to.
Above me is the hanging bulb 
         with my late step-dad’s makeshift switch
which once I was electrocuted by (strange current went surging
from my fingers to the middle of my arm).

My eyes are just beginning to adjust.
                           But still it is so black.
Something’s in this room with me.
            I sense, I do not see   malignancy -
It’s omniscient; omnipresent 
                      and pressing onto me.
A bat is fluttering eerily;
                I know this, and yet I cannot see its wheeling frantic wings.
I make my way
                        so     slowly   to  the  bulb 
                    suspended from the low and cobwebbed ceiling.
Reaching out I grasp the switch,
             and a face appears suddenly before me.
Fear washes over my entire being. . . 

Satan has me!

(This was, in fact, a nightmare, the worst I ever had. Nothing else ever came close!)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/26/2017 4:37:00 PM
Thanks for the entry Andie & wow that was an awful fear! Congrad's & Light & Love
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Date: 9/6/2017 7:43:00 PM
Hi Andrea: Wow! How eerily the words creep on the page slowly and creepy and then a face! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/4/2017 9:08:00 PM
Congrats Andrea!
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Date: 9/4/2017 9:03:00 PM
Whew! How terrifying and how well-written! Mt worst nightmare was about--believe it or not--whippoorwills! CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 2/25/2017 1:23:00 AM
Wow. Andrea, this is scary stuff in an excellent free verse! I think the scariest movie I ever saw was The Omen, and yes, it gave me nightmares. Thank God I dont remember them in detail! Congrats on your win!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/22/2017 8:54:00 PM
Such a bad experience down childhood lane...Well penned. Congrats.
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Date: 2/22/2017 6:39:00 PM
Sounds definitely creepy and scary! Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 2/22/2017 4:04:00 PM
Andrea, that's classic - a dark, dank cellar...
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Date: 2/22/2017 2:37:00 PM
Congrats on this pivotal placement - I was so happy to see it. I bet your feet could not move in the dream ??? Enjoyed the poem and the chills they grew on and in me. Love ... CayCay
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Date: 4/20/2015 12:47:00 PM
The doorways we open for them. This reminds me once, after finishing one his books. Three of his cohorts did visit, but it wasn't in a dream. Hugs, Rob.
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Date: 5/4/2012 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Stranded/Ghosts" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/4/2012 12:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea!! great time a day what a nightmare!! :O poor baby!! the exocist cured me from watching those movies...I used to love watching them till that one...lol no more...I'm glad it was only a dream!! big hugs, love ya, deb
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Date: 5/3/2012 12:50:00 PM
A cut and paste apology for a cogratulations message but congrats. Am on holiday with limited access xx
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Date: 5/2/2012 3:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Andie. I loved the intrigue in your nightmare that wrote this poem. Shudders and shadows! Great writing! Love, Lotus
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Date: 5/2/2012 2:43:00 PM
That was one scary movie!!! Congrad's on your win. Light & love
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Date: 8/28/2011 6:59:00 PM
oh by the way..i was only able to send Debbie PART ONE of the INTO THE STORM piece (soup software is limited)....but the real ending of the story is in PART TWO of INTO THE STORM, which you may perhaps enjoy.....best wishes
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Date: 8/28/2011 6:56:00 PM
scary dream like atmosphere......that electric stuff is something i recall too....unpleasant episode.....congratulations on your placing....I dont often write but i read a lot of you r stuf f Andrea its all high quality and I enjoy it a lot...best wishes Syd
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Date: 8/28/2011 12:56:00 AM
Aaack!!! Oh my gosh! and i read your comment in Chris' of how this was a real dream?? This sure was a suspenseful write (gosh I wonder how you woke up? Screaming or all rattled maybe?) What a very eerie dream! Wonderfully written! That mention of the bat reminded me of that dream I had when I was screaming since I saw a baby bat inside the house & yup it flew right into my open mouth! Haha! & thank you very much for your inspiring comments in mine :D Made me smile so much ^_^ hugs to you!
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Date: 8/27/2011 10:45:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your wonderful win with this magnificent poetry my friend.. super ..enjoy..luv...
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Date: 8/27/2011 7:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sure am glad that it is not true..Sara
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Date: 8/27/2011 7:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Dream On" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2011 6:20:00 PM
Yikes.....!!! I hope you will wake up soooon!!!!!!! Great poem, Andrea!!! Congrats!!
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Date: 2/5/2011 10:28:00 AM
Scarry image of childhood !Nice write--kash
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Date: 1/2/2011 4:32:00 AM
Wow Andrea, this is quite a memory honey! The imagery is outstanding; I felt I was taking that walk in the cellar with you. What a frightful experience this must have been to endure as a child. Thank you for your entry... Lay
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Date: 4/23/2010 2:05:00 PM
'Something's in this room with me'...Wow! Reminds me of something right out of a Hitchcock movie!...We had the same type cellar in the house where I grew up...the washing machine was one of those antiques with a wringer on top...Great and scary stuff, Andrea! (Don't touch that switch!!) - Tim
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